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| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] | | Pages (148): [ « ‹ 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 › » ] | Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 19, 2005 18:58 CDT
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aww!! what happened?? surely cain was trying to do that exchange of blood thing, and he accidentally killed her... right?
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 15:19 CDT
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Man, I hope that rumor isn't true...I don't think he did it either, but I'll never know...until later, right? I have a feeling Cain's going to spy on Gin when she goes out with Pierre....not that I can't blame him. Oh, tomorrow will be my last time reviewing for the week, my friend's little brother is going to have surgery and they don't know if he'll be able to handle it, so she really wants a friend in case the worse should happen, would you keep him in your prayers? His names Johnny if you can...thank you! Now, onto Sari15 fanfic!
| Reviewed By: Glenda On: July 19, 2005 13:57 CDT
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I went back to reread Purity 4 from the beginning and found out somehow I missed a chapter. After reading that chapter, now I have a question. I fully realize that I probably won't receive an answer if I'm on the right track, but would you be so kind as to let me know if I'm on the wrong one so this isn't bugging me? Did Cain wait to mark Isabelle until after Bellaniece was born, and did it mess up somehow? I imagine that would explain the guilt he feels over her death, the reason people thought he killed her, and the blood on his hands back in Ch. 3 (I think). Also, it seems that you're saying his youki never chose Isabelle, which could make it more difficult for him to know where she needed to be marked, right? If he got the wrong spot, that could go very, very wrong since the human's blood has to be mostly drained before the youkai's can be given if I understood the earlier Purity stories correctly. Anyhow, could you let me know if I'm completely off track, at least? I'm greatly enjoying Purity 4 and looking forward to the remaining chapters as you post them!
| Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~Nsi On: July 19, 2005 11:30 CDT
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hmm. interesting transactions (as always) between Gin and Cain. it's cute how Cain is willing to call inu over all of this (that would be a phone call to hear. i can just about imaginie inu barking back, "well how the hell do you know this?" and the logical truth (that would never be told) "well...she's been sleeping in my bed and she told me.") OI!! anyway, great stuff with Kich as well. soo...they think Cain killed Belle? i'm really starting to get it, i think. she killed herself, didn't she? something in my gut is saying that, cause we all know Cain can't do that (gulp...). interesting. keep up the good work, as always. lovin all the fics!
| Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 11:27 CDT
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how sweet of belle i thought that all that cd's and stuff was for her...but hmm the mystery of how isabelle died is still unknown...i hope we can find out about that past soon...[oooh and i'll check out that new fic in your a/n] and whatever happened to that 3-day bet o.O hah i cant wait to see what happens at the lunch with gin
| Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 19, 2005 10:36 CDT
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Ah, more great chapters. Things are getting complicated - especially for Gin. That was sweet with Belle and the CDs. I really like Kelly - she's a smart girl. Thanks for the updates!!
| Title: Ch45
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 09:11 CDT
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Ooh...Gin is going out to lunch with some guy she admires? And he's supposed to be a big-time pervert? This can't be good...wonder how Cain will deal with this whole thing. Then we go from dating to the the other end of the spectrum...murder? The thought struck me awhile back that Cain had something to do with Isabelle's death...but murder? This is getting deep (as if it wasn't already, lol)! Excellant chapter, I loved the little twist where all that stuff Kich bought was really for Kelly, and not for Belle like he thought. Shows a very caring, thoughtful side of Belle, no? Keep it up, we're all cheering for ya!!! d('')b
| Reviewed By: IKMS [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 06:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo! Cain's youkai didn't pick her or necessarily like her? Go Gin go! She's still got a chance! Right Sueric right? I didn't get to my email for two days so I had two chapters to read and i was almost in tears reading the parts with Cain and Gin. She's so heartbroken. So convinced she can never measure up. But I feel better know you would never let your characters have tragic endings! Somehow, someway, you always give them what they need to survive and have the love they deserve! That's why I love your stories so much, love, life, fighting, drama, angst, you name it, it's there! Thank you for more chapters and keep up the wonderful work!
| Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 23:03 CDT
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lol 'The Kich' heh go kich! And a dog groomer? haha good idea! three days..hehe
| Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I was gone for a week, and look how many beautimous chapters arrived while I was gone. Lovely lovely. Hmm. Let's see... ...I feel so sorry for poor Belle! She's all sad, and Cain knows she's sad, but he doesn't know why, and she won't let him make her feel better...awwwwwww. Kich and Belle are hysterical, as always - though Drunken!Gin rates. Gwwaaaa...looking forward to the next update!
| Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 18, 2005 19:37 CDT
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sweet!!!! 3 days!!! this can only end well. ;)
| Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go Kich!!!
| Reviewed By: EAP On: July 18, 2005 18:25 CDT
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Excellent, go Kich! I'm a bit torn becaus he was being a dog, but I hope good things come from this. And everytime he says 'The Kich' I crack up...Boys...And The scene with Gin and Cain was really well done, very touching and tender. Please keep writing!
| Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
3 whole days....wow thats got to suck lol...Well great chapter update soon!
| Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: July 18, 2005 12:56 CDT
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heh heh, a whole weekend. I'll pray for you Belle. And Gin finally said she loved Cain, cool.
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