| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 22:36 CDT
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Also that means that sesshomaru knows how he feels towards gin, toga knows how Kichiro feels towards Belle, and Kagome knows how Kich and Belle feel towards eachother..? wow, gives a whole new meaning to 'confusing' lol not really. Wow this review is strange isnt it? Well keep up da good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL Cain scooted farther away from Kichiro after Belle said he was gay, i couldnt stop laughing! Love that chapter, add a new 1 soon plz ^__^ great way of making Kich study Belles rack lol. But i dont understand 1 thing..why are Cain's crests so..AMAZING? i dont understand..?_? oh well, update soon plz
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Title: Chapter 27
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 21, 2005 21:15 CDT
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OMG that chapter rocked! Kich's line was one of the best lines in the story, that was so funny! Heh, I couldn't stop laughing! I love that Sesshoumaru can see through Cain so easily and knows that something is up between Cain and Gin. And poor Cain...he's so doomed with Gin in her bathing suit! And just that whole part with Kich and Belle and the bathing suit and everything was so perfect. Bad Kich! heh. LOL that's so funny that Toga showed the tape to everyone...and Sesshoumaru's reaction to Belle saying Kich was gay was just perfect. That whole scene was so funny. I can't wait to see what happens when they go to America. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: benlzy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 20:21 CDT
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Kami... Every time i read ur writing, it juz keeps getting better and better. Ur characters all seem 2 be popping out from ur words and acting out the scenes from the chapter. Totally awesome. U have managed 2 capture every single detail of the characters... Unbelievable... Gin is so special! I simply adore her; Cain 2!! Will Belle and Kich get closer in America? When will Cain and Gin get together? And wad about IY and Kags's baby? Lol!!! Pls keep on writing... Hope I dun die be4 ur next chapter is being posted... The suspence is killing me!!! Argh!!!
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Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 19:25 CDT
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YES!!! GO BELLE-CHAN!!! All the power to her! But, Sue, I have a few questions to ask you. I'm going to writing my own stories of IY soon... and because I have been so attached to your stories... I can't seem to filter what was real and what was fictional as far as the episodes... 1. All the pairs are canon, right? So Sessh/Kagura are ok? 2. Is the youkai in the head thing canon or something that you made up? 'Cause it's very cool and I would like to make reference to it in my stories... 3. Is Midoriko supposed to come out of the jewel or did you make that out of logical sense? 4. And, the whole concept of the "mate". Is the conception of a baby on the full moon and new moon thing canon (though maybe not in the eps) or did you make that up too? May I marvel at your imagination once again?! I just wanted to know these minor details because your stories and the eps meld together in my mind. And, indeed, if these details are your original works, may I ask permission to make minor reference to them in my stories? Of course, I will put ALL credit to you in A/N's and again, they will only be minor and I will not be creating stories out of them. I figured that I would ask you, so I wouldn't get into a situation of plagarism or anything awkward like that. Please let me know as soon as possible! Thanks so much! ~Jesachi
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 19:03 CDT
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That was hilarious! The innuendoes and Toga's revenge. Amazing job! LMAO
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Title: One word...
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou! [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 18:41 CDT
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Priceless!
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 17:10 CDT
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Hey! I have been out of town (out of country actually - in Africa) for the past few weeks and am just now catching up with your story. It never ceases to amaze me the amount of time that some people will commit to antagonizing you! *sigh* Well I am thoroughly enjoying the story and I think that all of the characters actions are perfectly logical (though I do want to smack Kich up the side of his head). I am somewhat saddened by the fact that this is the last purity continuation but I am sure I will like your other stories just as well.
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Title: good stuff
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Fan311 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Funny. I guess now he'll have to prove he's not gay. Men's Candy, who would have thought... Cant wait till the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: June 21, 2005 15:49 CDT
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Damn... I think I'm in love with Toga! That was hella funny what he did! Does man pocky really make you grow hair? ::shudders::
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:35 CDT
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Oh dear god...I was laughing so hard!!! I feel so sorry for Kich. I am so excited though!! This means Kich and Belle will be together...alone, and this can only be good for Cain and Gin too!! Oh and I really like your new picture that you drew of Cain and Gin, quite scandalous if I must say so myself!! Anyway, ja ne!!!
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:33 CDT
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AHAHAHAHA that tape sounds sooo different if you dont watch it lmao...very funny chapter haha oh gosh my stomach is killing me that was hilarious
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Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:12 CDT
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Alright... my offical favorite OC's of yours have to be Toga and Cain... I FANGIRL THEM BOTH. *cough* Anyway... Hilarious chapter, again. I really needa stop reading these when I'm eating, as I tend to start laughing in the middle of a bite of food, and then I choke. Alas... ...OK, this was a very stupid review. However, I still find your story hilarious, and it's not the whole thing, just those few IDEAL lines, and the running jokes (the whole 'Gay' thing and the deal with the ears). It leaves me grinning idiotically, and for that, I commend you.
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 12:09 CDT
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hand-clutching-side. Can't-stop-laughing. Great chapter sue, the DVD clinched it!!!! Interesting the convo between Sess and Cain. The entire chapter was absolutely magnificent, and since all I have are fruity fan-girly things to say to you, I'll cut this comment short. Thanks for sharing :) ~le frankie~
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI On: June 21, 2005 11:55 CDT
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somehow i just knew that the DVD would wind up in that session...i just knew it. yeah, Toga helped Kich on that one, i'll give him that...but damn. hehe, i can just imagine Sesshoumaru's reaction to that one. have i mentioned i love the character of fluffy-sama? ::sigh:: i like how he is also aware of Cain's ...feelings?...towards Gin. very well done. hehe. can't wait for the next chapter! great job!!!
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