| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: June 10, 2005 21:43 EDT
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Two chapters and two kisses. Nice. Kich needs a good kick in the crotch. He is being so irritating and overbearing. The way he's acting right now, Belle's youki must be insane to be interested in him. Besides, what exactly do these men think Gin is supposed to do with her life? Stay in her bedroom and play with dolls? She's practically immortal - that's a lot of Barbie time. I think these guys are so caught up in being the hero, that they haven't thought through the ramifications of their expectations. Grrr... Poor Belle. She really is misunderstood. She hasn't done anything horrible enough to justify all the anger. She's young and imperfect. Sigh. Thanks for the great chapters. I'm off to Japan for a few weeks so won't be able to read and review regularly. I will miss reading your wonderful stories! Thanks in advance for the adventure, your updates are a highlight of my day. Looking forward to catching up when I get back. Forever in your debt.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The last two chapters were kick-ass! We all don't want anything to happen to Gin and we know that the men in her family would do anything to protect them but dang, they need to be thwapped at the back of the head sometimes. Kich was obnoxious and rude to both his sister and Gin but I guess that's because he didn't expect to see his sister in the club, much less with Belle. The almost fight with Cain was great and the hallway kiss was HOT! Too bad Kich had to say all those things after and made Belle cry. *thwaps Kich*
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story so far. I have got to tell you, at first I was reluctant to read this story because I haven't been a huge fan of Gin. When you first intoduced her in Ryo's story she seemed kind of rude & unfriendly to Nezumi. And I adore Nez, so I got irked at the slights. Please, don't think I'm flaming you, that is just how I interpreted it. Now Gin's growimg on me, slowly but surely. Don't know if she'll ever be one of my favorite characters that you've created, but she is entertaining. I do love Belle though. She is awesome. I feel sorry that Kich treats her so badly. It seems to me that a lot of what Belle gets blamed for isn't really her fault. Everyone, especially Kich, seems to want to believe the worst about her. I hope that Kich realizes his mistakes soon though.
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Title: EEEEKKK!!!!
Reviewed By: TenshiKaika On: June 10, 2005 20:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:runs around the house with arms flaying behind me as I scream with excitment: Gods . . . I'm going to DIE waiting for Tuesdays chapter.
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Reviewed By: Descendant of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:16 EDT
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Males can be such asses. But we luv them anyways!
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Title: ...OMG
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 (again, not signed in) On: June 10, 2005 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...OMG... I am just about speechless... What an amazing chapter! *takes a bat to the stupid people who dare to criticize teh amazing sueric's story* Your story, your characters. They amazing. And never let anybody tell you anything but.
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Reviewed By: HIkaru1617 (Not signed in) On: June 10, 2005 19:28 EDT
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Wow, all I can say is wow. I really liked this chapter, it was sweet and warming in some ways, and other ways just makes you widen your eyes and...well...say wow. Kichiro seems that he just can't get his pride aside long enough to wake up, to Bell or for Gin. SHeesh, poor girls.
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Reviewed By: yashafan18 On: June 10, 2005 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved this chapter finally cain and gin kissed and so did belle and kich i can't wait for the next chapter will kich see cain in gins apartment?
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh wow.. i've been waiting for this chapter for sooooo long!! lol :) i wish there was a blushy smilie, cause the whole chapter was blushy.. awww! I really enjoyed how they were not the typical first kisses, particularly Kich/Belle. I can't wait to see how this goes, it is well worth the wait til tuesday to have this chapter today!:D
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(i hate signing in) On: June 10, 2005 18:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, my sis and I were talking about Gin moments with candy! We both lick the chocolate off and someone pointed out how wrong it looks. Sue can read my mind!!! i love the kisses and the panties. Awesome chapter. I don't know how I'm going to wait until Tuesday tho! They need more boxes to put 10s in for your fics. Like 50,000,000,000 of them
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 18:33 EDT
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I can't wait for more. The kisses were great btw. Kich is a lot more like his father than I think he wants to admit. Both he and Inuyasha fought their attractions to the other like the attractions themselves were the most henious hell beasties. But love always wins out in the end! Good jogb princess Sueric! Hats off to you!
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Reviewed By: Akihanah On: June 10, 2005 18:26 EDT
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You know, they say its a fine line between love and hate, but I think its more like a blurry gray area with Kichiro and Belle. I also love how he calles her Belle-chan while she is very formal, Dr. Izayoi. Has she ever called him Kichiro? You know, Belle may not be completely good, but Kich really isn't much better. Toying with peopl's emotions just isn't something you do. Well, see ya Tuesday, I guess. i'm happy you put up mondays chapter though, I don't know if I'd have survived the cliffhanger over the weekend.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 18:13 EDT
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Two kisses two couples...one night....my oh my what shall we do? I just loved how they kissed in anger, but now I want to kick the shit out of Kichiro for saying that to Belle; that was just wrong...I hope his youkai yells to him about that lol...and I'm happy that Cain finally kissed Gin as well...I wonder what he'll think when she puts on that dress with the wings.
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Title: Chapter 21
Reviewed By: DawnFire881 On: June 10, 2005 18:09 EDT
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heh well, since this is me, what I'm about to say should be completely expected....awwwww yay! They kissed and I LOVE it =) heh, though I still would like to smack Kich a bit! ;) If people think they kissed too early, they should remember this: you have written many fanfictions over the last year, and you have never once given me the idea that you don't know what you're doing. I trust you 100% with your stories and I thought those kisses were perfect. You know what you're doing with your story and with these characters, you know how things should and will come together and when the time is right for such things. I trust you and I loved it =) The confrontation between Cain and Kich was perfect too! I could definitely feel the tension between them! Hehe, I love the 'woofs' again too! And Cain's line about apologizing to Gin's panties was so great! Gin's dress sounds so beautiful too =) Wonderful chapter, Sue!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: cake_fairy On: June 10, 2005 18:05 EDT
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yeh!!!!! i'm happy it's my grand night and i got two chapter's i'm sad that i dont' get a monday one but thats ok!!!!!! sooo keep up the great work and hope you have a good day!!!!!!! cuz i am i'm grading! ja ne
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