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Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 14:36 CDT
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I am happy to see email notification up and running again. But not half as glad as I was to see an unexpected chapter from YOU! And...Dr. Ass-Monkey?? You made my day! Great chapter, hope all is going well with you!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~nsi On: September 04, 2005 14:20 CDT
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awesome chapter. man, that was a tension breaker. poor kich! damn. at least he was a good guy and didnt' hit back...but i'm sure that when someone finds him passed out in front of the house, all hell will break loose. oh no.... GREAT story and i really hope all is good with your family! take all teh time in the world, Sue; writing is always something that you can do when you have time, family is forever.
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: September 04, 2005 14:12 CDT
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This chapter was great! Poor Kich.. though I see how Cain would get pissed smelling Belle and sex all over him. Love it!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 04, 2005 13:42 CDT
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Yeah! MM notification is working again and I discover a wonderful, unexpected chapter. Life is good! I really enjoyed this chapter. Kich was awsome, noble, brave, strong, heroic - I could go on for days (so many adjectives, so little review space). Thank you for the fun read! Now, to post this review so I can go back and read it again.
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: September 04, 2005 13:39 CDT
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Aw! Poor Belle, poor Gin. So hard to have their loyalties tested. That rips at ones soul to have the two men you love the most in the world at each others throat. Because no matter what you do it isn't the right answer. The chapter was wonderful! A little indulgence that I just loved this morning. Thanks so much for sharing with us! Take care of you and yours. C
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Title: OMG! I got an alert! Wheeeeeeeeeee!
Reviewed By: Darkless (nsi) On: September 04, 2005 11:52 CDT
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Whoohoo! Cain the amazingly virile TaiYoukai flexes his muscles and tosses an unrepentant hanyou around. Well, the cat's out of the bag...we will see where they go from here. I can't wait for InuYasha's reaction when he finds out what Gin's extra-curricular activities she has been participating in. Heheehe, lovin' it! -- Take care.
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Reviewed By: Getitcjc On: September 04, 2005 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am reading this chapter and the first thing that cames to mind after reading the end was "tis but a flesh wound" from Monty Python. I am sory for the troubles that seem to have piled up on you recently. I have not been able to review or email or I would have sent my condolences earlier. I will say that the tenison has beeen building recently and that this makes beautiful use of said tenison.I find it interesting, kich's noble matyr point of view in the chapter, but definately a great read
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 11:32 CDT
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hmmm...i knew the shit was gonna hit the fan sometime in regards to belle and kich. i have the feeling cain is gonna get a bit of a talking to from some hanyou girls now. hmmmm, i wonder how their little talk is going to go. If cain reacted like this with belle, what will happen when our dear inuyasha finds out about gin and cain...mayhem, maiming, perhaps...I hope things are getting better for you and your family. you are in our prayers and dont worry, your writing is always up to par. update when you can, your writing is worth waiting for. Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: chiisai tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry about your father-in-law as well...anyways, I've only read the first few chapters of this and I'm deciding to read your first three installments of this before I continute reading this. But I totally love this story!! You're sucha good writer and extremely talented! Your characters are wonderful and vivacious and the story plot is amazingly creative!! Peace.
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Title: Sue
Reviewed By: Nilkwep [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Sue, Im sorry to hear that your father inlaw isnt doing as well we all hoped. Im sorry i havnt been able to review your last few chapters cuz my comp is broke. Take as much time off as you need. I just wanted to let you know that your writing is definatly up to par. All i have to say to you is please dont rush coming back to writing it isnt worth the stress. My wish as well as my prayers are with your family. I sure that everything will be ok. I know from your other posts that you care about your family very much and in my opinion they are lucky to have you. Your devoted fan, Nilkwep P.S. I cant wait to see how 'Daddy' reacts to Belles news!
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Reviewed By: shadowguard On: September 03, 2005 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am sorry about your father-in-law. I hope he gets better. My uncle and a leg amuptation, but its all better now! The last chapter with Sesshomaru was hilarious! I don't think your writing is bad even with your stress. If it is, I can't see it. Good luck! - i'm from fanfiction, not mmorg - i think new chapters on mmorg work properly. the new chapters on ffnet dont work... thats why i am on mmorg. on fanfiction it goes up to 52 or 53 or something like that
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Title: Thoughts and Prayers
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 23:11 CDT
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o-o I haven't been able to review your stories for a bit and coming back to find this...Sue, you and your family have my sincere thoughts and prayers. While I'm not old enough to have have a family, I know what having an emergency like this is like. I'm not really quite sure how to end something like this, so just know that you and your family have my prayers and support! God bless you, and peace be with you. ~ Seth Johnson
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 10:41 CDT
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Sorry bout your family. Hope they are getting better soon. I know the feeling of not being where your needed. My Grandmother has a agressive tumor in her neck which is being removed on my birthday. And well being overseas it's nerve wracking to say the least to have no way to be where I feel I need to be. So take all the time necessary and know your family is in my prayers. Ja Ne, Crolynx
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: September 02, 2005 00:32 CDT
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Thanks for all the great stories over the past months. You have brought me many, many hours of absolute happiness. Truly a precious gift! Thank you for your patience, for your persistence when things were rough, for your vision that created an entire world, and for sharing yourself. One of the things about your writing that initially caught my attention was your replies to reviewers. It was wonderful to see a real person behind the words. I, of course, got hooked by the fantastic story (posting every day helps - especially with short attention span people like me) and it soon became a morning ritual to sit down with a cup of tea and a new chapter. I always checked the response section first to see there were any special messages for me, and then settled in for a nice read. For some reason the "final thoughts" section was always a favorite of mine - kinda like the icing on a cake. The character's parting thoughts always made me smile - even when the story was angsty. I have loved all your stories and characters (though I always have special feelings for Inuyasha/Kagome stories). You have also been an inspiration. I have always used my responsibilities as an excuse to not do things (like write) but over the past year I've seen that you have kids and a family and responsibilities just like me and yet you accomplish so much. Makes me realize that my excuse is pathetic and that I really can accomplish more than I am. That's my goal now, to push myself a little bit instead of just
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Title: Request
Reviewed By: Shrikant [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just started reading fanfics on mm.org and yours are some of the best. The Purity series is something like I have never seen before. One question about this story. Belle and Gin are seen rushing into the showers after a bout of almost-sex. But neither Kich nor Cain seem to do the same. Does that mean that they don't smell like their partners or that they don't mind? And a request for a fic. In Purity, Sesshoumaru tells Inuyasha that he would be the tai-youkai ... err, tai-hanyou ... if something were to happen to Sess while Toga was yet not of age. Could you create a short fic where Inuyashabecomes the tai-hanyou for a week while Sess and Toga have been called away? The thought of Inu dealing with the intruge of leadership makes me grin. Thnak you.
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