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Reviewed By: Nilkwep [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sue another great chapter!I cant wait till the truth comes out about Gin and Cain....Who will win if they fight Inuyasha or the great and powerful, magnificent, awe-inspiring, ferocious and virile North America tai-youkai, Cain Zelig.Anyways keep writing Sue and ill keep reading. You have my support as always. Your Fan, Nilkwep
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner (nsi) On: August 24, 2005 14:46 CDT
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Man Kich has got to be up to his kneecap by now, forget inserting foot, he might as well just put the whole damn leg in there. The ear twitch thing was so cute and I totally got the mental image of Belle waving to Ryo. It was nice to see the moment between Inuyasha and Kagome, gave a nice break in the story and reminded the readers that this is still very much their universe. I hope your father-in-law recovers quickly. Write when you want to, don't rush it just to appease readers because then it won't be your best. Take your time, we all understand.
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 14:05 CDT
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i liked this chapter. its good to see a inuyasha and kagome moment and to see that they're going to have a child...hmm and when kich said that i was like baka...that was a pretty rude thing to say to belle. and dang when kich finds out about that bruise, i would like to see how he'll react to that. and hm it was interesting to see inuyasha thinking about cain and gin like that...maybe he'll accept him? hm anyways i did notice ur authors note and i wish your father-in-law well and you too. we'll still be here so update whenever you would like too. and again great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Zacho On: August 24, 2005 13:28 CDT
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Oh shit! That's not good, i uuhh, i don't really know what to say to help or anything but well i'll.. uhh i don't pray so i can't do that, but just... i hope he gets better! i really do! and as for that chapter, very good again, and damn that kich stupid idiot... haha... *sigh* Looking forward to many more, Zacho, PS If i knew what ur postal code was and where you lived, i'd send you card to give him :) but since i don't you can get him one anyway, or jsut a big hug, but both are good. If you ask me? I like hugs better. L8er!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 12:15 CDT
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Great chapter sweetie, love the interactions. I hope your father in law will be alright. Take care of him, don't worry about us, we'll be here.
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: August 24, 2005 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Sorry to hear about your father in-law my heart goes out to you and your family. You'll be in my prayers. Hope everything gets better for you and don't worry about updateing family comes first. Good luck
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: August 24, 2005 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. sorry bout your father-in-law, car wrecks are the worst. it's so abrupt. ...however... what does that have to do w/ your tolerance level? are people pissin you off again? damnit people! if you dont have something nice to say! (or a reasonable/constuctive critisim) then dont say a damn thing! ugh. anyhow, great chapter! but what's w/ belle? ...they used a condom, so she isn't pregnant... was it the credit card? does she think that he's buying her off? or is she just pissed that he wont give her a reference?...hmmmmm...
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Title: Wow i love this story
Reviewed By: Xoblackchildxo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 11:07 CDT
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I just wanted to say that I absolutley enjoy reading your stories. They have so much meaning and people can truly see the dedication that you have put into them. You truly have a gift! xoblackchildxo
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Reviewed By: tinky On: August 24, 2005 10:53 CDT
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awsome chapter!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 10:36 CDT
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I still can't believe Cain's level of denial; he even played "poochie" just to cheer Gin up. I'm guessing he wouldn't do that for just anybody. I doubt that he showed his four-legged persona to Isabelle because I'm guessing that she was never fully accepting of his supernatural heritage. Hmm, I wonder if he's ever done that with Belle?-- Huh...Kich and Belle...caught in the office again. *chuckle* Not surprising that Ryo decided that that wasn't a good time to confess the oops earlier during training. Now Kich has gone and put his foot in his mouth with a badly timed and off-color joke. Way to go Baka Gene. --Yay! Some Inu-Kag fluff! *squee!!!* (was that fangirl enough?) LOL -- Dang, that's rough. I hope your father-in-law will be alright. In my prayers.
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Title: Purity 4: Justification
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 10:26 CDT
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What is it about the Izayoi men that they are constantly putting their feet in their mouths. You named it the Baka Gene, and they all have it in excess. Just how long will it take for Kich to realize that he just called his future mate "easy". Feh indeed. I hope your father in law will be fine. I will send confident thoughts his way that he will be completely recovered and doing just fine as soon as possible.
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Reviewed By: moongal850 On: August 24, 2005 03:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh, Kich is in trouble. Tsk. And the cat visits him when she gets fed up with Ryo? Hilarious! Im so sorry to hear about your family. Hope everything works out okay.
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Reviewed By: **kolohe** On: August 24, 2005 03:22 CDT
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My bf often says things without really thinking of how (bad) they might sound, so I think I know why Bellaniece got upset... Good luck to Kichiro on this one!
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2005 00:43 CDT
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That was so sweet! The date was so romantic and he even changed into this dog form for her. *dreamy sigh* Such sweetness.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: August 23, 2005 23:50 CDT
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wooo....i loved this chapter it was sooo sweet. my favorite part was the "'You . . . you want to see it?'...'You want to touch it?'...'You . . . want to . . . ride it?'"..Unfortunately my mind to a hard left turn right into the gutter during that little conversation. This has got to be one of my favorite chapters so far. I loved the fluff...and the marshmellow fluff as well. Hmm...licking of fingers would not be under my classification of a parental activity...activities like that could lead to things that create that which leads to parental behaviors and activities...lol..loved the chapter...cant wait till the next one..cant wait till the email updates get fixed too! Ja ne~ Darkflameangel
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