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Title: continued..
Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 15:00 EDT
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Back to the last two chapters, Belle waving at Toga was priceless! She has no shame! Lol I love her character so much, though I felt Kich's hurt at her behaviour and to add salt to injury her birthday news (though the way you wrote that scene was great, I laughed at the way she announced when her b-day was). That makes Inuyasha and Toga witnesses to their escapades, I would love to see Ryo's face if he were to ever walk in unannounced now that would be well worth paying to see! Cain's conversation with Sesshoumaru was a great show of both protective uncle and care for Cain; am I right in assuming he knows of Cain's promise to Isabelle? Hence the warning and subtle advise. I thought that scene was great character development. This has to be the worst kind (in a good way) of addictive obsession ever! Glad to hear your feeling much better after you bit the dentist! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Angelstars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:59 EDT
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Eek, why do I sense the impending doom of clash of the titans sense. I am still in shock that Belle-chan would actually have kept her birthday from Kich! Though now I can't wait to see what Kich has planned, in you face Cain I say-hopefully he'll be around to see it too! Ah, I can't wait to for the Inuyasha clash! I'm sure it will be the highlight of Inu's day to take Cain down a notch or two-just imagining it now Inuyasha has the defence training, the knowledge that Belle and Kich are together and that she has a tiny problem about not wearing underwear…then again Cain has the biggest thing on him-Gin, his baby girl's affections. However, the whole Cain is going to die to be with his mate after Belle mates and has pups has yet to surface, there's a slap to our dear hanyou's face-does he really want Gin to go through something similar to what Kagome and he went through? Impending angst you say? I see it all happening as soon as the cat (or dog) is let out of the bag.
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:53 EDT
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Yay! Do I smell a birthday party coming...? O.o Hehe... Another good chapter, I really loved how Gin almost cried when she realized how Cain looks of her, and the promise they made each other. ^_^
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Reviewed By: JBird7986 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:06 EDT
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Finally caught up on all of your IY fics! Excellent chapter, looking forward to the next one! Very sneaky writing move about Belle's birthday. That caught me off guard as much as Kichiro!
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Reviewed By: tinky On: August 10, 2005 13:30 EDT
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when is her birthday?
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Reviewed By: xuaeved On: August 10, 2005 12:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Belle really has no shame, does she? Loved this chapter, as usual :D stupid dentists *shakes fist*
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice love the chapies cant wate for the next up date. i rily love the way your storys flow like this. your fan for life, inuyasha_lovers
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Reviewed By: Glenda On: August 10, 2005 10:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my, you bit your dentist? 0_0 It may be my imagination, but I see a big conflict headed everyone's way. Inuyasha isn't exactly known for his ability to keep his mouth shut (and Ryo doesn't seem like he'd be able, either), so I wouldn't be the least surprised for him to blurt out to Cain about the defense lessons (strike 1), his son being Belle's mate (strike 2), and even something about the lack of undergarments Belle wears (strike 3 for embarrassment). And I don't recall you making a point about Gin showering so religiously after relations with Cain...Inuyasha and the twins are going to smell Cain all over her, aren't they? It's almost like watching an impending train wreck, but I can't keep from checking to see if you've updated again. :) Is there a support group for people addicted to your writing?
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Reviewed By: inuyoukaimama (nsi) On: August 10, 2005 08:55 EDT
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Awww! So glad it went well and you aren't having any complications from your root canal! *darn dentists! they always yammer away with their hands in you mouth!* This Chapter was great! Cain just promised to stay as long as Gin needs him? wants him? He does know that she ain't going nowhere? She'll need him until the end of time... That was a beautiful chapter! Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 05:51 EDT
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Hearing Inuyasha saying that assultants would be on Belle like white on rice had me rotf!!! Ryo's comment about gecko-youkai was pretty funny as well!! Wow...Belle has an odd place to be marked...from all the others anyway, but then again, it's understandable. Aww...poor Toga, catching them in the act (Belle waving was priceless lol)...I hope he doesn't let that slip to his father, 'cause then Sesshomaru would tell Cain, and Cain would come after Kich. Wow...I sence lots of angst coming, but after all, you did say that it was going to get angsty!! Don't you just hate it when dentists expect you to answer their questions while they're 'fixing your teeth' shall I say? How are you supposed to answer? They must be fluent in mumble or something 'cause that's all I'm doing when they ask me questions while doing their job.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 05:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I bet that Toga got an eyeful for entering without knocking. Tehehehe! Anyway, great chapter as always. More angst coming our way i guess, with Gin and Cain coming back. I wonder if Cain will be able to smell Kich on Belle, even after the shower. Hmmmm.....
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Reviewed By: EAP On: August 10, 2005 04:47 EDT
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Glad to see (er...read?) that you're on the mend! Ahh, yes, the painkillers are a blessing, aren't they? And you can use a keyboard while on them? You are something. Wonderful chapter, I loved the part where Kichiro asked when her birthday was...made me laugh. And Cain saying he'll stay with Gin...So sweet, and more than a bit intriguing. I look forward to your next chapter!
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Title: Chapter 59
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 04:23 EDT
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I see angst coming, specifically with Gin and Cain's relationship. We still need for Inuyasha to find out about their relationship, which will most likely happen when Gin comes over and he smells her. Then we also need to find out about Isabelle's mysterious death. Inuyasha was a little snippy with Belle during training but that's expected from Inuyasha. Plus, it doesn't help that Belle is Cain's daughter. I was wondering when Belle's birthday was. I can't believe she didn't plan on telling Kich. Well now that he knows, I'm sure that he'll have something extravagant set up the next day. Something that will shock Belle and hopefully Cain will be around to see it. Almost forgot, OMG! Toga walked in (LOL!) and Belle waved (-__'). I can't help but love Belle's personality. Looking forward to reading about Kich getting heat from the rest of the family about that. You bit the dentist? All right! Never had the pleasure of doing that.
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Title: Chapter 59
Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 10, 2005 04:20 EDT
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What's up with the piano? So now the couples reunite and try to explain themselves to each other, huh? Let's the fun begin, mwa ha ha! I can sympathize about dentists. I have sensitive teeth, and I need so many painkillers to numb my mouth I lose my ability to chew for the rest of the day. Not the mention that the dentist herself, ironically enough, has putrid teeth that looks like they've never been brushed once, yugh. Aw well. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Darksquire [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. I stopped recieving e-mails when my favorites were updated so I thought you hadn't been updating. I finally checked the website though and found out you had been updating all along. Well these last couple chapters were amazing, as always. The phone converstion between Sesshomaru and Cain was funny. Sorry to hear about your tooth. That is no fun. Well I will be back wednesday.
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