| "When the world Ends" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lucient, who for some reason is not logged in. On: August 03, 2005 06:21 CDT
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Depressing and terribly dark... I loved it! XP
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Reviewed By: Sango The Lecher Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAaaaaah! No! don't end there?! the story is so good so far!! Please continue *sob* Okay, so I'm a little melodramatic. But, it really is a good story
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is......wow. It's kind of weird imagining Inuyasha in the role as an abusive, dominating boyfriend and Kagome as a submissive woman just taking it. It's a new angle and I'm looking forward to your deeper exploration of it.
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Reviewed By: squeeker On: July 05, 2005 12:42 CDT
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ok i can the not getting away from him because she just cant itws as simple as that shes to scared of him i get that. but u mean to tell me that thats not his big mistake! what the hell does he do! this is an awesome story u have really got me interested and i hope u update soon.oh and what was with sesshoumaru? i dont really think he would have dropped his act around her even if he had his info but yeah anyway great job update soon.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:03 CDT
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LOL, fuckbag... ((Adds you to author favorites)) What a great story... but to let you know, I've had to attend several social elitist parties. They're all rich fucks. No one applauds when you enter, lol. It's more of a courtesy to announce you to the room. It definitley makes minglin easier. I always attend early so I'm either not announced, or just announced to a few people, lol. It's kind of uncomfortable. If you're nobody like me, they turn back to what they were doing when you enter, lol. :)
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: July 03, 2005 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Silent tears* Ohh I hope things will work out for them!!!Soooo I hope you update soon as ya can I'm enjoying this fic!!
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: May 22, 2005 21:13 CDT
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yay another chapter!!!Ahh the romance blossoms...can't wait for the next chapter!!Update at your own pace your doing great!!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 11:58 CDT
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hey this is a great chapter cute how he says he not allowed to get involved with his clients then kisses her well update soon please
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: May 16, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short but good/would say sweet,but it doesn't seem that way...I love it update at your own pase.
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: April 25, 2005 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!Another clifhanger!!!!!Well it was a good chapter mysterious......Well update whenever you feel like don't rush if you don't have to,but I'm waiting on edge for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 00:22 CDT
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eh LOL nvm I forgot to check your profile ..hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 23:05 CDT
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Hmm Yes Very interesting I enjoyed it!good choice of cliffhanger. just wondering is this your first fan fiction?
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: April 12, 2005 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't do this to me it was starting to get good. Update pleaze!!!!!!!! LOVE YA!!!
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: April 08, 2005 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh,please update!!!!You can't just leave off like that!!!!!It's too intresting!!!!
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Reviewed By: youkaiinuluver On: April 03, 2005 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! That's really good!!! please update sooonn!!!!!It sounds intresting so far!!!
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