| "Hanyou no kokoro no naka de; Within the Heart of the Half-Demon" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kira562 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT WRITE MORE!!!
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Reviewed By: pinkrosebud_1991 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i did not see at the end that the jewle was stollen that was good i wish that there was more to read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bon-day! On: July 10, 2005 00:49 CDT
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First, I agree! Wada is the most impressive composer! I also hold the WIND CD and even got my mom hooked on it! Ahh, the power of ggod music. Kind of like the power of a good story! It soothes you and relazes you while still makes you wonder on what's going to happen next. Like yours. O crap, kids, look what you did! You pissed off uncle Naraku! Come, come! Bring us another chapter sweetie! I wanna get this story on the road! --Kisses n hugs--
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Reviewed By: yoyoyoyoyo On: July 09, 2005 18:55 CDT
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inuyasha and kagome must be together!!!! This story has such depressing moments in it, doesn't it?! Oh well, it real life right? adoring it! ^__^
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Title: AWESOME!!
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 15:32 CDT
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THIS ROCKS!! this is so good, please, update whenever you can!! ^^ Shane.
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite a gripping story. Excellent work. No reviews since April? That's just not right.
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Title: AHHHH!
Reviewed By: SangoGlacier On: April 22, 2005 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! abadoo this is the coolest thing ever! i'm so happy you posted the story! I think once you get it started,it'll be one of those stories where you just sit there and think "now why can't I write like that?" J/K. LLAS, Glacier
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: krity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is great!....the curse is confusing me though...what is it? so please up date really soo ni cant wait for the next chapter!Ja!
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Reviewed By: inufreak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 17:43 CDT
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its pretty good i hope that you will update soon, i HATE cliffhangers! i will keep reading!
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Reviewed By: Inugurl14(not logged in) On: April 12, 2005 16:13 CDT
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Awesome story! Update again soon!
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Title: okay, jalayna...
Reviewed By: fire_senshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 15:41 CDT
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everyone say hello to my sister...thanks for that review, dummy. actually, it isn't really based off of what you think it is, so there. I've changed it alot since i told you about it. *sticks tongue out at her*
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Reviewed By: Jalayna Ward On: April 12, 2005 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Seeing it's based on another story, I kind of have an idea of what's going to happen. so hurry up and get the next chapter done!!!!! Good job!! jj
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Title: shows promise...
Reviewed By: Linwe On: April 02, 2005 10:53 CST
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Well, I like the premise you have set up. I'm looking forward to reading the first chapter when you put it up.
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Reviewed By: 23sess23 On: April 02, 2005 10:00 CST
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It sounds reeaallyy COOL please do it!!!
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Reviewed By: sess66678 On: April 02, 2005 09:59 CST
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I like the idea please write it!!!
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