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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: SessandRin On: June 04, 2005 07:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work! Unfortunately, I didn't cry, but I never cry with fanfictions or movies or anything, including pain. It was really well done though. As werewolfpixie said, make another one where he finds her again. Also, as Siri and sess/rin_&_inu/kag_fan said, he should have used Tenseiga. Good work! You have a good unpaying career ahead of you! -Sess/Rin and Kagome/Inu fan, Rose
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You didn't make me cry, you made me bawl! Please write more Sessh/Rin fics. And email me if you get the chance, because you're my new best friend. LOL. Don't worry about other people's nit-picky comments and shit. That's why it's called FAN FICTION. ;) Like you and I write. It's your fic. If you wanted him to fuck a corpse, it's gross, but it's all you. More power to you. I'll be back to read more. James
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Reviewed By: miko_onna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh myflippin god i am crying so hard i loved it sooooooooo much!! tears sre literally pouring down my face. i loved his words to her. all of them. you did great on that!
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Reviewed By: Siri On: May 06, 2005 13:32 CDT
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It looks like you updated your Author's Note in response to some of my comments. Obviously, you haven't watched ep.96 again since. Tenseiga is a Sword of Life, not healing or curing like Viz translated. Since you are so stuck on the word 'heal', how about those people called 'healers' then? They cure sickness as well as heal wounds! Another thing about this fic that I didn't want to comment on before: If Rin was so sick and close to death, I really doubt that she would have the energy to have sex and enjoy it. When I was reading it, I was surprised that Sesshomaru knew that "This would be the first, and last time he would ever have her", and then when Rin died almost immediately after they were done, I was like: Huh? C'mon.
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Reviewed By: Dark Angel Of Love(not logged in) On: April 12, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooooooooooooooooooo GOOD! I LOVED IT! it was sad to but he'll find rin again, I have no doubt. and all that stuff about the tenseiga, I think your right. it makes perfect since ^_^ keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Isis snd Shiva On: April 07, 2005 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dam you thats not nice you made me cry. As a comment if what i have found is corect the tensaiga is is the life sword or sword of new life reanimation so I believe you are right her soul would return but just to die again very shortly after. but annyy way wonderful story Love it
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Reviewed By: Siri On: April 07, 2005 02:24 CDT
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Oh, I thought you updated. About ep.96, if you watch it again, you'll see that Sesshomaru had already left when Jaken was stung. They probably didn't know when he would get back. Healing vs. Curing: that's just English translation, I don't think you should draw your conclusion just from that. Tenseiga puts life back into a dead body by destroying the imps who come to take the soul away. But like you said, you can do whatever you want with your fic. It would be better if it's consistent with how things work in the series though.
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Title: Weeping
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am crying. . . please thing about a sequel. That was so beautiful. Maybe just a note that he sees her reincarnated and happy, like a short chapter. Fluffy lost Kagura, now you have taken Rin! Very sad, but easily the BEST Rin/Sesshoumaru fic i have ever read.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 17:16 CDT
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Wow, tha twas really sad. That made me cry a little. It was very good.
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Reviewed By: sess/rin_&_inu/kag_fan On: April 04, 2005 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with Siri sesshomaru wouldn;t let her die after that0_o... he would have at least tried to use the tensaiga
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: KadaedeNSI On: April 03, 2005 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not so much depressing as it was interesting.
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Reviewed By: Siri On: April 03, 2005 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable fic. But what happened with Tenseiga? It wasn't explained, and I don't see why Sesshomaru wouldn't at least try to use it on Rin.
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Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: werewolfpixie On: April 02, 2005 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was one freakin said story but so good. i loved it. the next fanfic you write let it be where sess finds rin again. he has to have a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: kenpanyoung [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for writing this beautiful story. I really enjoyed the ending since it gave Sess hope that he will find Rin again!
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Reviewed By: ShagsChain [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 12:05 CST
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I don't often go in for Sess/Rin fics, but I think you did a great job with this one. It was beautiful and I like that you ended it with a bit of hope. Very nice.
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