| "Crazy Sunday Mornings" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: KD On: May 19, 2005 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agh!!!! Don't stop!!!
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Reviewed By: KD On: May 19, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gleeful chortles, that's what you're giving me! really loved when all four ended up with weapons out and Yohji reviewing what would happen to anyone having sex with Aya...I'm on chapter ten and I can't stop, geez I hope there's lots more! Your tenses (past and present) tend to jump a bit, and it seems the narration does the same (first to third and back) but I'm having so much fun, things I'd normally hate don't bother me at all!!
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Reviewed By: KD On: May 19, 2005 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, so good, I really, really want more!!!
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 12:40 CDT
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wow. Its getting so much better and interesting. Can't wait to see what you think of next. Keep up the great work. Ally
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 11:33 CDT
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Ok, here I thought we are going to get somewhere, but Alas you have a talent for cliffhangers as some of my other wirter favs do. But I LOVE SUSPENSE so ...YIPPIE. There is nothing worng with Shounen-ei (probably did not spell that right)and Yoji/Aya is my favorite couple, but I must say I laughed hard at the thought of Aya stealing Yoji's booty calls. LOL Keep up the great work and I cannot wait until your next post.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 15:00 CDT
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Wow I must say you have quite a talent at making sure everyone who is reading this is glued. I cannot wait for your next post. Need...to...know..what ..the ...hell...is ...going...on.. AGHHHHH
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Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 07:23 CDT
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And for some reason, this fic has become my crack. It's so... out there that I'm compelled to read it and figure out what the hell is going on with Yohji and Aya and... well, everyone. Please, continue writing so I can continue reading and sustain my addiction. ^__^
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Reviewed By: Rosewhite On: April 19, 2005 20:58 CDT
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Definitely different. I enjoyed the dark humor and the strangeness of it.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 10:22 CDT
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Dying to know where you're going with this fic. Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: LoneCayt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this... it was different, and I appreciate uniqueness in a fic that deals with the same old characters. I enjoyed the style, too.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, intriguing, humorous yet with a dark undertone. I look forward to more.
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