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Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 09:50 CDT
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I just reread your story and I still love it. I was wondering if you are ever going to finish it.
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease hurry, i cant wait for the next chapter! PLEASE!! UPDATE SOON!!
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Title: Still Loving it....
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 21:38 CDT
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I wrote a review on April 17, 2005 11:04 CDT and I just reread your story today to give me something to do and I'm still loving your story. I hope you haven't abandoned it. It is really amazing. I love this take on how Inu figures out he's got a pack.
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Reviewed By: KhayenRose On: July 10, 2005 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really Like your story. Update Soon Please!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 21, 2005 12:21 CDT
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I hope you update soon. I have enjoyed this story.
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Reviewed By: Zhaoyun On: May 27, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your inuyasha 'i'm sorry' story, it really nice to read, and it romantic, also why don't you mention about kikyo, i haven't wathc all the movie yet, so i don't know what i can suggest, but shouldn't you also put shippo training in to the story, you mention about it, so you should show it in the story, don't have to be a lot, also how shippo going to use it, because inuyasha did give shippo weapon. also you should talk about sango and miroku a bit more, because their part was important also, in my opinion anyway. and when do you think you going to release the next part, i looking forward to it. but regardless of everyone include my self idea, you should continue the way that you think will work for you.
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Reviewed By: You have errors On: May 03, 2005 13:30 CDT
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While I like your story, I must point out that you have many errors in it if you are using the manga or anime as your basis. Firstly, Inuyasha can and does talk while full demon he taunted the bandits before he killed them in the anime and told Kagome to stay away from him while in full youkai form. He is not mindless when he becomes full youkai, he loses his soul and doesn't care who he kills. Secondly, the prayer bead necklace that controls Inuyasha when Kagome says 'sit' is not connected to her voice. It is connected to her miko powers. Imitating her voice would not activate it. I am disappointed in this chapter for those reasons. There are other minor errors that could be ignored but I have listed the main two. This is not a flame. I've read your entire story. It has kept my interest for the most part and you have excellent grammar and writing skills. I just wish you would have avoided errors or warned readers that you were going to change the facts to suit your story and not follow the established facts of the series.
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: May 01, 2005 13:18 CDT
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I'm glad to see Kagome growing in power in your story. You have a very good story here and I impatiently await your next chapter. Thanks and please update soon!
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Title: I'm Sorry
Reviewed By: Jamie Lou On: April 30, 2005 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story I really enjoy it can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: lazzykane7 On: April 28, 2005 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sometimes just watching someone brush their hair is intamate i love that .....please continue i can't wait for more...please e-mail me at lazzykane@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Mr Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story because, unlike most stories, each charecter is still respectable. Most people end up making Kagome some bitch screaming sit, or Inuyasha a jerk...you kep their quirks but made them likeable. The developments are natural, and work perfectly. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: lazzykane7 On: April 22, 2005 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so good ican't wait for more
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Reviewed By: PB On: April 22, 2005 04:16 CDT
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I've read your story up to Chapter 6, and I'm really enjoying it. It's a nice story, and your a good writer. One thing I was wondering about was the end of chapter 4: "As she stood there with her arms wrapped tightly around him, she finally realized that the voices she had been hearing, her mother's and Hojo" ----Thats all that shows up on my computer, it seems to be the middle of a sentance, and I cant get the rest to show up! This has happened on my computer before, but it usually goes away when I refresh. And it seemed odd that nothing of it was mention in the next chapter. So, did I miss something? If you could e-mail me (purple_butterflies15@yahoo.com)and let me know whats going on, that would be excellent. Anyway, I really am liking your story, I think its a really good plot. I'm off to read the next chapters!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: April 21, 2005 23:00 CDT
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Thanks for updating so often. I'm enjoying your story and I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: lazzykane7 On: April 18, 2005 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm enjoying your story so much i come back everyday to check on updates
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