| "Seto's Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 52 ] |
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Reviewed By: Abandon Mokuba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i read everything just today it was soooooooo good!!!! ^_^ i loved it so much i also love mokuba ya know i think i was crying in so parts o.o;;; well keep going and i cant wait for vol. 16!!!!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 03:00 CDT
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I love it. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2005 12:22 CDT
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Much better :P. Great rest-of-the-chapter =]
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um...Just so you know, your chapter just cuts off during the middle of a sentence...Or maybe it was intentional, like a cliffie lol. Anyways, this is probably my favorite fanfic EVER. Just to let you know. And I can't wait until Kaiba and Noah's duel! And I have a certain sneaky suspicion about Noah's pen....but I'm not going to blab anything and later look like an idiot if I'm wrong, hah. Can't wait until the next chapter! (Or the rest of this one, haha) Tootles.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 11:28 CDT
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Hey, sorry for the late review (we were in Maryland pretty much all of last week and I've been really busy since then...). But anyways, I honestly couldn't tell that you lost your editor! I didn't really see anything wrong with this... I can't wait to see (er...read,, lol) Kaiba's duel with Noa! Bye4now.
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great job. I really am enjoying this.
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I can't wait till Seto duels! It's gonna be wild! PLEASE CONTINUE!
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Title: Sonja,Jake and Midori chat
Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Sonja): Please add more!!! (Jake): Yeah, the unknown past of one of the smartest of the cast is very intriguing!!! (Midori):*heart eyes and drolls* (Sonja): ever since she read your story, Midori has been heavily crushing on him. (Jake): could you put some spaces please? It's getting kinda hard to read...
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Reviewed By: ShamonaCeline [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh! I'm loving this! Please update! I want to see more of this!
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Sorry I couldn't review earlier. It's been really crazy around here and I can't read or review from work anymore. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 14:36 CDT
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I can't write a really long review today cause we gotta go in a few minutes, but this was a really good chapter. I can't wait to see if Kaiba whoops Noah in a duel or not...I hope he does! Well I g2g fast, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 13:46 CDT
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*applause* awesome chapter ^^ i can't wait till next monday :D
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Title: dragonlady222
Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: animaster_sonja [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unbelievable! Great storytelling!!! One question though, was that his real surname or did you just make that up? Anyway, I'm hungry for more so update soon!!!!!
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