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| "Teaching Goku" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: JessiV On: March 14, 2009 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I consistently check on this story to see if it's been updated. I love thie story and plot. The last cliffhanger was true torture. I hope that you install the next chapter soon. I look forward to seeing what happens next,
| Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 12:12 CST
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| Reviewed By: Rmyl On: December 30, 2008 10:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic in incredible. it's been so long since i've read a good one, and this is the best. great scenes, great characterization, really beautiful. the end here is killing me (in a good way)! please write another chapter, and fast! I love it, great work.
| Title: Great
Reviewed By: Devil_n_Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm kind of really sad that you get so little reviews here. I mean each and every chapter is so hot and occasionally cute. The interactions between the Saiyuki crew is completely realistic and the moments between Goyjo and Goku are both sweet and hot at the same time. I would have never really thought of such a pairing before but I'm loving it so much. The eager and possessive Goku is so cute, especially in the beginning of their relationship. Oh my god and the way Sanzo looked like he was going to kill Goyjo when he found out about the relationship was priceless. The fact that Goyjo sometimes derives pleasure and prodding the Sanzo is suicidal but still funny. I really wish that you continue the story and I'm sorry if I haven't really reviewed as much as I should. I have reviewed this story before, I promise. And I hope to review it in the future. So I hope the writing muses are always with you because you always seem to inspire me to do the right thing.
| Reviewed By: Chou ni Natte On: October 01, 2008 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to say, this fic pawn(ed) by soul. Seriously, I started...yesterday? They day before yesterday? And just finished it. A long time ago, I read chapter one and loved it but didn't check back for updates until now. I was very pleasantly surprised to find 21 more chapters. I pointed my friend to this fic and she's on ch. 8 and loving it. I am enjoying this fic so damn much, and the implied-ness of the other relationships is killing me! But somehow, I am enjoying it. So yeah, I want to thank you for writing this. It's a story I'll never forget about and will reread whenever I want something that will sweep me away.
| Reviewed By: leila ~nsi~ On: September 25, 2008 08:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really meant it about the warning for the ending, huh!? now we've got an interesting new twist in the plot. how are they gonna handle this? or, will gojyo even tell goku... or will goku catch them? talk about a putting a wrinkle in things. =P not that the story hasn't been exciting already, but with their relationship growing, this has to be the worst timing possible. like you didn't know that. lol i look forward to finding out what you have in store for us next time. and, btw, this is the ONLY gojyo/goku i will read. it makes sense where others don't! thanks.
| Reviewed By: Goatchild On: September 14, 2008 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fic since almost the beginning (how many years has it been now? XD) and I think I even reviewed once or twice before. I love this fic to death. It's actually the only Saiyuki fic I read. No other fic compares! Anyway, I've always wondered about this, and since you asked for songs, I might as well say it now: Every time I read this fic, I get the song Pretty Baby by Vanessa Carlton stuck in my head, for obvious reasons. XD Besides the title, the lyrics of the song actually do fit Gojyo's and Goku's relationship in this fic pretty well. It fits so well in fact that I've often wondered if the song inspired you in any way. So that's my song suggestion, assuming it wasn't already a driving force in this fic. ^^ I look forward to the next chapter, no matter how long it may take to get here! Especially with that ending! I've been waiting for Hakkai to stir things up again. XD Can't wait~!
| Reviewed By: monkeyking2089 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter...I was slightly confused at the beginning, but I still enjoyed it. I'm anticipating the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: monkeyking2089 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I began reading this fic a while back and I have to say that I enjoy your writing style and the originality of the story itself. I believe we can see your writing technique mature and it's wonderful to be a par of that experience. I very much look forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Teaching Goku
Reviewed By: jessiedark [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:43 CST
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I would have rated but I was suddenly not sure if 10 was best or worst. I love this story and I was thrilled to see another chapter.
| Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looooove this fic. This was such a great chapter; you are totally forgiven for the wait if we have work like this after every break. Loved seeing the way Gojyo both wants to fuck Goku into the mattress without the condom and "coddle" him by wearing one. Great stuff! Can't wait for your next chapter!
| Reviewed By: jiele On: December 03, 2007 02:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*almost fell off her bed in excitement when she saw that this fic had been updated* ^^ <333333333333
| Reviewed By: Windy-- windwhisprer On: September 22, 2007 17:42 CDT
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Wow. That's all I have to say. A friend of mine told me to read this, and I'm glad I did. Now, I do not like GojyoGoku (Or vice versa) by any extent of the imagination. But oh wow, I love what you're doing. Your characterization is amazing, the plot is wonderful, and your smut is delicious. I wasn't planning on reviewing, however I do want to say this. You've weaved an interesting story, and it seems like you can't find yourself a happy ending. If Gojyo and Goku stays together, then they're sacrificing Sanzo and Hakkai's happiness. However, if they break off into their respective 39, 58, who knows how happy Gojyo and Goku are going to be? So, I do want to say that I'm interested in how you're going to tie this up. If you plan on going one way or qanother, I hope you write an alternate ending. Because I do want to see Gojyo and Goku stay together, but at the same time I'm a regular 39 fan, and I'm just waiting for Sanzo to make some kind of move on Goku. So, again, I hope that you write an alternative ending. Or, you could write a story that mimicked this one, only from Sanzo or Hakkai's point of veiw. I would so read that, even being against 38. (Angst fest, much?) I love what you're doing and I hope you continue. ^___^ My email is inu_yasha_rox_@hotmail.com if you would like anything. I know it's cheesy. I've had it for years.
| Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 10:28 CDT
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Heheh... Another wonderful chapter (half a chapter?). I find it amusing how Gojyo's still worried about the whole pregnancy thing, even if only a little. Despite the fact that he knows it was a dream and could never happen. Hmm, I wonder... What would a child born of only one parent and a... spring... look like? o_O; Like the parents? *pictures mini Sanzos and Gokus running around* XD Even if it was a dream... It's still a funny idea... Heheh, so, yeah o.o; Back to this chapter. I love how Goku's still so embarassed and such. And only thinks with his stomach. Where you ended was priceless. Even after that Goku still wants food. It's cute. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the fantastic work.
| Reviewed By: Wind Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 12:38 CDT
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Ack! o_o This is such an interesting story! XD An interesting pairing, with VERY interesting things happening. So did evil-goddess-lady give Gojyo a bad dream, or what? That still confuses me a bit, but it seems like she was just being her evil self and doing things to get someone beat up. :P Either way, the idea of pregnant Goku and/or Sanzo is hilarious. Sanzo already acts like he's PMSing all the time, I can only imagine how horrible it'd be to see him a full nine months pregnant! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! I still want to see him finally admit to calling Goku "pretty baby" since he says that alot. And I'm uber curious as to why he's saying it, and why he can't remember saying it. XD You're not done writing, right? O_O I'll cry if this is it. (There's no "tbc..." at the end of this chapter, don't scare me like this)
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