| "The Wolf and The Dog" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: yaoi-lover69 On: January 11, 2012 19:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! U loved it I started reading at 9am annd finished at 10pm I couldn't stop reading it!!! Plz right more!! |
Reviewed By: Aoichi Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2010 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
inuchanpuppy, I want to begin by congratulating you on your amazing story. I was drawn to it a few days ago when i searched for a InuXKouga fanfic (my favorite couple!!! X3) and yours came up. For two days I forced myself to complete your story which is an accomplishment in and of itself. First, let me get the negatives out of the way. I found throughout each chapter blaringly obvious grammatical errors such as missing words, wrong words, complete misuse of writing conventions, and overuse of words which caused many sentences to be unnecessarily confusing (hence the the 6 rating). However, these errors didn't detract from the great creativity and style for which you wrote with. I loved the story and felt myself running through each scene in my head as if it really happened in the anime. To be completely honest I could completely see this fanfic as a successful doujin, no lie. Though you posted the last chapt a little over 5 years ago, I found myself reeling in anticipation for the next chapter (particularly when I had to go to bed due to lack of sleep. :P). I really enjoyed this fanfic and look forward to reading your other pieces. Just work on grammar and your writing will soar. Thank you for writing-Aoichi Mizu XD |
Reviewed By: kurry On: October 25, 2010 19:38 EDT
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Im sorry to say this but yur story sucks ass! you have no literature skills at all! the story goes from old fashioned talking to regular. the characters suck and it was quite frankly painfull to read! first page i couldn't even get into let alone cringe at the writing!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Lady_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2010 07:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a wonderful pairing story!!! you have great creativity!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2008 05:00 EST
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this is a good story, i started reading it at fanfiction, but at chapter three switched to here. i'll read the other stories later its 2am and i have to get started on homework.
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Reviewed By: Sasha-sushi On: September 17, 2007 21:54 EDT
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i like how you did naraku, (sorry about spelling)kukukuk, so funny
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Reviewed By: Slayer66 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have made my day^^ I've been searching for at least one of my favorite Inuyasha pairings and I finally found a good one^^ I love it, and I shall reread it everytime I wanna read an awesome KougaxInuyasha^^
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Reviewed By: Tyra On: January 12, 2006 17:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sick jackass.
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Reviewed By: Bahamian Royalty On: July 17, 2005 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it
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Reviewed By: katiepatie (not logged in) On: May 18, 2005 18:50 EDT
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*rides in on unicycle* wheee! *crashes into wall* ouch... anyways! great chappie! ^-^ I'm very hyper right now if you haven't noticed, so I'm just gonna leave my review at that and go bug someone else...ciao! (I'm not european, but I think it adds flair to say goodbye that way)
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 19:25 EDT
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I LOVE the story! ^-^ Great job on it!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 23:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
OH NO!!!! What is gonna happen!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 04:56 EDT
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0,0' Another good chapter!! Miroku eyeing Sesshoumaru.. Who can blame him?? Lots of action taking place.. Cannot wait to see more!!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 14:53 EDT
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NO I hope inuYahsa doesn't get raped!!! Is he ever gonna turn into a guy again? I hope so but this is ur fic and not mine...hehehe Maybe u can help me with mu Kouga and Inu fanfic ne? Just send me an e-mail of ur answer. Keep updating and u guys keep reviewing her!!! Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: Youkai_Obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 02:15 EDT
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Another good chapter from you. Ohh the dark hottie is involved now…0,0'..Cant wait to see what happens next!!
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