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Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 02:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful story! I loved the romance most of all, the angst would be second, and the humour third. ;) One of the most creative stories I have seen so far. It was interesting how you addressed all the issues and wrapped them up. The only thing I can think of is that I assume since Sesshy lived ~500 years that Inuyasha will also far outlive Kagome..but no one seemed to think of that, or with Sang and Miro, even though they came to the future with them. Just curious that no one thought of it in the end. Then again, it did kind of end a little abruptly but it left plenty of room for the imagination to wander I suppose. ;) Keep up the good work! My only suggestions to improve your fics are to increase their length, add more descriptive elements, and increase chapter size. ^^
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Title: His Wish
Reviewed By: FranklinBe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to update SOON!!!! I love how you are really descriptive, it's like your really there with Inuyasha and Kagome. Keep up the good work and remember to update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: Sango The Lecher Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love it because it's so cute. I would like to let you know 2 things though --; First of all, it says that this story is a one-shot, which is how I stumbled across it Second, it says the story is completed, which is one of the only reasons I read it (no offense), I totally didn't think the story would be as good as it was (thats a compliment btw hehe... Thanks and update!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos On: July 23, 2005 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
moooooooooooooreee!
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Reviewed By: godie6790 On: July 19, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww! how cute! love it! plz update soon!
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Title: FABULOUS... need I say more?!
Reviewed By: Manda On: July 01, 2005 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of all the fanfics concerning Kagome and Inuyasha's 'ending' (meaning story after the jewel, of course) this is the best, hands down! I love your writing style, and the story is fun and believable. PLEASE update as soon as possible! I can't get enough of it!
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Reviewed By: Terrasina Dragonwagon, who is not logged in On: June 26, 2005 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Gaaah. You keep doing that!! That's - what - three chapters, four? - where you've acted like he's FINALLY going to tell her he brought everyone else, too, and then you end the chapter. Frustrating person. Gaah. So, obviously, looking VERY forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: to lazy to sign in On: June 11, 2005 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey love it!!!update soon. it be funny when Kagome finds out bout every one else and then gets 'mad' at Inu and 'beats em up' update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 16:47 CDT
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YAYAYAYAYYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYYAYA I LOVE IT...UPDATE REEEEEAAAAALLLLLLYYYYYY SOON.....well a week or two but w/e lmao...great job
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 18:29 CDT
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I LOVE IT.....KEEP UPDATING!
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Reviewed By: pookymon On: May 04, 2005 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I really,really like it a whole bunch. PLEASE KEEP UPDATING.GREAT JOB!!!
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Title: Now THIS is truly awesome.
Reviewed By: DarkAngelsTears [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job on the story! I haven't read something this good in a while! WAY TO GO!
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your story very much. Please update soon! I can't wait until she sees everyone again!
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Reviewed By: inu-fan125 On: May 04, 2005 08:15 CDT
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dont make nuyasha forgive kagome so easily like he always does when she osuwaris him i mean that must hurt like hell and she take is as a joke please make him mad just for a bit and have it so he doesnt forgive her even for ramen that would tell her he means business so dont make him forgive kagome just like that
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 02, 2005 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talented writer that you are. Update again very soon please.
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