| "Crossroads of Betrayal" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: Another chapter
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 08:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another very well written chapter and it is very good to hear from you again. The plot of the story is moving along at a good speed and the length of the chapters is very good. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 21:50 CDT
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I never would have thought of going in that direction with the story. The confrontation is inevitable, but Kagome lying to her mother.
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Title: Crossroads Of Betrayal
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 13:08 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please?
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Title: Ch.7
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch.7 is here and I was far from disapointed. The chapter was great and I can't wait for the next one to come out. Now that Kagome's group knows some tidbits things could become interesting. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe you could have Shippou, Shiori, and Shina all eat some kind of youkai growth accellerater. Then you could have a threesome pairing of mates.
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Title: Ch.6
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, the story is moving along very nicely and I like it very much. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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Title: A thought
Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am curious as to where you would take this story if Inuyasha found a way to take his new group through the well and introduced them to Kagome's family and the future.
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Title: Yeah
Reviewed By: JebusOfNazareth [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 22:57 CDT
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Im working on that. Zoloft is a fantastic. (this is water81 from FF.net) Anyway, read knightfall, a batman arc sometime. Fantastic chapter.
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Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah chapter fix is up. I liked this chapter a lot too. The plot is moving along nicely and so far it is a great story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: Peacemaker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story that you have started to write. I like the sango/inuyasha pairing the best becux I think that they make a great couple. Also the plot is a very good one as well and I think that it would be easier if you made the Inuyasha group your main focus but, talk about the other group so that it helps the story flow better. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, could you try and update at least once a week. It is hard to follow a story if the author updates every couple months becuz I forget about the story by then. Thanks again and keep up the good work, Peacemaker
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that I would like to read about the others a little in your story. It's more curiosity than concern, well except Ayame, I like her.
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Reviewed By: Nothing but a Blur [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story but I just wanna know see how you use Sesshomaru partly because I am fan of Sessh but also how he would react to a serious Inuyasha and two new groups. Add on the the Story. Great writing and plot
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello again. That is so funny, Inuyasha surrounded by girls, all with names that start with the letter S.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it would be nice if Jinenji joined Inuyasha's new group also. He has a knowlegde of herbal remedies and is pretty strong. I think Jinenji and Shiori make a cute couple.
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Reviewed By: Inu-Shinta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always thought that Kagome's actions concerning Koga are wrong. Please write more and update soon.
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