| "The Heights Of Demon Love" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: yutakayumi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 17:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your stories! I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and expect a email from me later today or tomorrow.
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Title: T.H.O.D.L.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 30, 2005 18:01 CDT
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NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! You Can't Just End Like That!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MMFF lover On: May 24, 2005 14:59 CDT
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I Like this stroy. I'm keeping up with it to!!!!!!!!!!!!! So are you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You know you spelled none the less. It's supposed to be all one word. You don't have to fix it. Other than that all good.
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Reviewed By: MMFF Lover On: May 20, 2005 16:20 CDT
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O.K. I don't know unamed but i agree with them. You can't leave a cliffe and just stop writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!added just beacuse |
Title: T.H.O.D.L.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 20, 2005 16:16 CDT
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HHHHEEEEYYYY!!!! You can't just end it there like that!!! ARE YOU CRAZY?
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Reviewed By: stovegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 22:45 CDT
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Sorry i didn't review last chapt. We have yet another twist!!!! Mwahahha Can't wait sits on edge of sit.
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Title: T.H.O.D.L.
Reviewed By: unamed On: May 11, 2005 15:53 CDT
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You have to contuie soon. I love this story and you better Write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 10:12 CDT
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Ooh I so did not see that one coming! Wow! That's so awesome that they're going to keep the kit. You're not going to kill him off when he gets older are you? You starting to make me get attached to Toushi. And I just figured something out... Why do you always use cinnamon rolls for like breakfast food and stuff? Do you personally like them and decided it would be easier to throw them into your little fanfic world? I eagarly anticipate the next update!
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Title: Lola like!
Reviewed By: Lola the magnificent!^.~ * On: May 06, 2005 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My friend (german_spaz!) told me about your story and I am now sooooo addicted! It keeps me sedated till the new anime is released. You said you update on fridays but you lied today. LOL I know you must have better stuff to do then publish your works even if they are worth it. Well love your story keep on writing and you can have my exclusive plush from Japan. *hands over Mint plushie(From Tokyo Mew Mew)* Keep her safe!
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Reviewed By: stovegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 22:39 CDT
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Do you have something agaist Botan? Or are you just follow the anime she always the one the find out the secrets. LOL!!! Are you going to give any info on baby parents? And which eye was twitching? Great chapt.!!!
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Reviewed By: *S101* On: April 29, 2005 21:39 CDT
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Very decriptive. I like it. Do not let 7 year old girls read any of it! Especally the ones named Silva don't ask ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2005 16:14 CDT
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OH MY GODS! IT'S A BABY! Wow, you just keep throwing fast balls don't you?! I never know what's going to happen next. Which is a good thing too, but still... A baby?! I thought just Hiei and Kurama were going to be the ones with a baby and not Botan finding one somewhere. I say they just let the little outcast demon baby die! I'm just joking, I love children to death. Ooh I can't wait to see what happens next! You better not leaving me hanging for too long. Oh hey look, I'm the first one to review this time. Cool!
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 09:21 CDT
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Thank you! I enjoyed those chocolate chips until they came back up! LOL... Wonderful lemony scene. I just loves it to death. *prints out and hugs paper until paper is crumbled* For you I make you some lemon cookies! Ooh I want some of your lemonade too! *stuffs mouth full of Goldfish* Would you like some Goldfish in return? I gots like 50 bags of 'em. Ooh I wonder why Koenma is worried when he goes to Genkai's? I BET HE IS CONSTIPATED AND NEEDS COOKIES! Or not... He could be there to call a meeting and tell everyone that Yomi is still alive. That could work too.
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Reviewed By: Shadow angel of music On: April 25, 2005 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow what a great story Hiei pregnant i like. I rated it a ten all the way across bored. I would wonder if you could email me when you update my email is writen_word13@yahoo.com. I would really like to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: stovegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 16:42 CDT
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you are truelly evil, you know that right!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. I tought he picked up the rose.
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