| "Dream a Little Dream of Me" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: June 21, 2005 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmm...completion is good...*yumz* lol
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 01:02 CDT
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Excellent! Great story so far. I love it. I look forward to more. You had such a great start with the dream and then how she comes back to reality. That was inspired. I hope you continue.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(me am lazy) On: June 08, 2005 18:31 CDT
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great chapter...just awsome.. update soo. till then, Zirra.
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Reviewed By: Akihana again On: June 08, 2005 18:23 CDT
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Yay! They finally get to do it without passing out! Poor Kagome, and Inuyasha. They have the worst karma in the world. Well, something finally went right. Kudos to them! Have fun with the family. Jaa ne!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 22:58 CDT
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interesting. sorry i haven't reviewed...truth is..i was lazy. This chapter explained a lot to me. The marking thing was really sweet. It would be realy cool if it was some force that made the marking come through her dream so she would want in it real life, and it actually helps her. Blood burning his tongue? That would probably suck more than a hot chocolate burn. like, when the hot chocolate burns, it burns the chocolate taste to your mouth....wonder what it would taste like as blood? ick... I also hope you update Shrine Prostitute, thaat looks like it has a lot of promise.
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Reviewed By: reader1 On: May 27, 2005 00:35 CDT
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awesome story! can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 21:33 CDT
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you never confusled me...i'm so proud*wipes a tear away*. i love this chapter, and i love how you made marking an unussual, not ussual thing for youkai to do. it's also great how kags powers protected inu-chan and gave her a vision of what needed to be done in order to stop baratu. i love your story please update asap, Zirra
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Reviewed By: elemenatlobsession On: May 24, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love you!!! ;P
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Reviewed By: forever_love [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 04:11 CDT
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Finally I've added your new username to my favourites list I have to admit i was a little lazy but I did it! Now all i have to do is wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this was great..I loved the twist! pelase continue and update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Artemis Moon (not signed in) On: May 04, 2005 21:39 CDT
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So far I've really enjoyed this story and you've done a very good job. It was interesting and has some excellent plot twists that left me stunned, lol...the only suggestion I can make is that you perhaps do something to tie together the last chapter of her dream and the first chapter where she's awake. How do I explain this...it is such a jarring leap from one to the other that for a while there, I was convinced you must have accidentally uploaded a chapter of another story. ^^;; I actually scanned ahead to see if I could figure out if it was the same story or not, and finally realized it was and continued to read. So to help other readers you might try to soften the transition somehow. I'm not sure exactly how. It doesn't have to be anything big, perhaps as simple as stating something in the author's notes that no, you really haven't accidentally stumbled into another story, lol! Oh, and also, I don't know if it was an uploading problem, but the first and second chapter are the same for some reason. Anyway, I can't wait to see more because that was a terrible cliffhanger! Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 21:45 CDT
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Well, that made my day interesting. Its so much easier to search on ffnet. Aww. I do try to review. I'm actually logged in this time too. nothing like bluntness to get through tough stuff. Though, i expecterd nothing less from our Yasha. Kagome took it rather well....though, she had just gone through the same thing in her dream. Ooo. What a great cliffhanging last sentence. That just needs to be followed by some good premotion music. Dun dun duuunnn. Heehee. Great job, and can't wait until you update, and tell us exactly what Kikyo meant.
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:44 CDT
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oo oo oo are the demons free? I'm pretty sure they are, but are they evil or good(hm why does evil have two words*bad and evil* where as good is just good*shrug* i donno) sorry for the randomness :P. well great chapter, glad kags and inu are all good again, can't wait for more, update asap please, Zirra ((PS thanx for sayin thanx, just doin my job as a reader)) Zirra
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Reviewed By: Techica On: April 17, 2005 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! This is so good! Please update when you can. I love the twist!
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Title: nani?
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how many times are you gonna repost this fanfic?
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