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Title: FF
Reviewed By: gimpys still kickin' On: August 17, 2005 03:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch. 4
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 20:08 EDT
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"I believe he wants to know what your last name is." -- I think Kagome would have said "surname" or "family name" because even if she is using the English method, her brain is more accustomed to the Japanese system. Sorry to nitpick.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 19:19 EDT
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I liked that the reason Kagome is in the present isn't because IY was a jerk. That just gets old.
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 19:14 EDT
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Really interesting start. You made the mistake of asking for opinions on the reloative strengths and, ever the Kuwa-fan, I think his mental should probably be the same as Yuusuke's, maybe a little higher. In any case 4 is too low. He does not have below average intelligence. Also, wondering why Kagome is not counted as human. Ah, well, I will read on and perhaps it will be explained.
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Reviewed By: RodTheBladeStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not a YYH fan; I don't even watch the show anymore, but I do read the manga in ShonenJump =) IY/YYH crossovers are increasingly common these days... However, HP? That took some work to put in (and not make look stupid), and I congratulate you. I WANT MORE!!!! ME WANT SEQUEL NOW!!!! 47/50
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Reviewed By: just call me rachel On: July 25, 2005 21:19 EDT
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if u have aim message me at lil fire fox girl and keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a kagkur right!^_^ thats my fav.!
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Reviewed By: Tsuki-tora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update asap! what r the pairings for this?
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: July 24, 2005 19:35 EDT
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*wags imaginary tail* ... I can see the sparks flying already. Ever consider posting this on Imaginitive Love? Kur/Kag shrine. Updated regularly... well, around the web mistresses lives of course, but there are several fanfiction writers there. www.katakoi.kloud-nine.com/ if that doesn't work, then switch the . after katakoi to the - and the - after kloud to . See you soon. Hopefully.
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Title: Aww..
Reviewed By: Chisuto On: July 23, 2005 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... it's not going to be a Hiei/Kagome? Would you settle for a Hiei/Kagome/Kurama, maybe? Let me know, and update soon! ~Chisu (Chisuto_0584@yahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: just call me rachel On: July 21, 2005 02:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont really review the stuff i read(and i read alot of stuff)so when i do review it means i really liked it its very creative!ive read a couple of crossovers like this but i like this one best so far :)no presure with updating just do your best ,ill be reading
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Reviewed By: animewolfgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is very good. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 17:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! You updated! I REALLY like this story. I hope to see another update soon!
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Title: chapter 5
Reviewed By: regretfully_yours_cassy_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 16:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
will Hiei be paired with anyone? please update soon
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Reviewed By: Drachegirl14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 22:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent job! I love this story, more soon please!
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