| "The One to Protect" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: umi On: March 21, 2003 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
just to let you know it takes 11 hours to fly from japan to germany than an hour from there to england there are no contiues flights.
i know cos i did this just over a month ago! |
Reviewed By: quartz-princess On: February 06, 2003 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a great fan of harry potter and ccs!
Woudn't it be great if draco or harry fell in love with sakura and sayoran was pushed to confess his feelings for her if he doesn't wants to loose her!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MoonGirl On: January 29, 2003 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
write more soon this us the third time i have been here in 3 years |
Reviewed By: carmela On: January 05, 2003 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
these fic is cool!!! i really enjoyed reading it. although there are a lot of hp/ccs crossover fics, it was somewhat different. all the characters are focused... not left out. it is easy to read and know who is talking or saying something. hope you'll continue... i am really waiting for it!! anyway i would just like to say i like the way you included draco in the fic! |
Reviewed By: SakurasBubbles (Cherry) On: January 04, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!! well i found this fic at ur site wen i started to read it, but then i went to ff.net and it wus different...and then i came here..i dont really kno wut ones better tho, but i kno i like both..i just hope u update soon, ur a good writer..well if u do update would it be possible if u could email me?? heres my email if u can.. baby_blue_bubbles88@hotmail.com
well update soon plez |
Reviewed By: Kairi On: January 04, 2003 09:24 CST
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I really enjoyed reading the story and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: me On: January 02, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is really good. pleeeeeezzzzzz write more. i love it |
Reviewed By: me On: January 02, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is really good. pleeeeeezzzzzz write more. i love it |
Reviewed By: khalynx_zoid [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm interested in your FanFic, so unique!!! please complete it, I'll wait for it!!! |
Reviewed By: sakura_katsuo On: September 28, 2002 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi,
i love your fic so pls update wish the best and more power. dont be upset coz even not all people read this fic us in our school loved it=)
wish you the best
ps.
another advise pls just make all the ccs cast a wond or give them a key or another book each if you like my idea just right it on your fic=) |
Reviewed By: Icy Flame On: July 09, 2002 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it! This is really interesting, I soooo can't wait to see what happens next! The characters are all great, loving it! hehe this makes me laugh! Kero is soooo cute, so is Suppi! They are absolutly adorable! hehe Anyways I can't wait to see what happens next in this, it is really exciting and very creative! hehehe you should have the two moon guardians come and 'visit' their masters, hehe Yue is great and so is Narkua(sp?)! LOL Anyways you are really a talented and brilliant author! Later yo |
Reviewed By: tomoyo_the_obessive_camera_girl On: July 07, 2002 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! I can't wait to find out what happens! ^.^ Please keep writing! |
Reviewed By: lala On: July 03, 2002 13:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's pretty good, i like it. however, i think that the scenes between malfoy and them should be a little more realistic. i mean, isn't sakura nice 2 everyone, even when they aren't nice 2 her. they just met malfoy, and the only one of the five who would actually challenge malfoy is li. otherwise, keep writing |
Reviewed By: alex On: May 10, 2002 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the fic was great! PLEASE finish it I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Princess Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2002 17:23 CST
Comment/Review:
This is best Cardcaptors fic EVER! keep writing okay? |
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