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Reviewed By: KrystalFox On: April 23, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic, but your style of writing is hurting my eyes! Everytime a new person speaks you need to start a new paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to understand and to read. However, very nice developement of the plot so far. You may want to develope the characters just a bit more though. Good job so far! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:14 CDT
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LOL! This was a very funny one. Wufei and Duo are sooo funny together. And it is so adorable how Duo worries over Heero....and what happened in the hummer. LoL I can't wait to see the next chap. What does Gedion (sorry if I spelled it wrong) plan on 'teaching' Heero anyways? Something good I hope.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 16:16 CDT
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Update! This is soo touching how the boys worry about Hee-chan so much. I still can't see how Heero gets caught after fighting two wars, but who cares. I like the story and that is all there is to it.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 20, 2005 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cool! Keep going, please! It's cute when the boys worry about each other, but weird when it's Heero that gets caught (it's usually Duo). I like this, so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Hey I like this one. Hope the guys make in time to save Heero! And kick that guards ass. Update soon!!
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