| "Until that Time" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: April 27, 2005 09:36 CDT
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Good, sweet and interesting.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 06:31 CDT
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What is that Jason dude's problem?! Heero is waaay too cute to wanna kill. And he hurt Duo, who is oh so cute too. What in the world is going on? Update, I wanna know what happens next. Heero being able to read thoughts is going to be very interesting.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 07:55 CDT
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*squeals* I know I'm a little late on the reviewing, but I really like this chap alot. It was so funny. Who knew Heero had such a colorful vocabulary. *grins* Yes 'damn genetics' indeed.
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Reviewed By: ryu-kun On: April 25, 2005 21:08 CDT
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this story is cool. there are a fe spelling errors but over all great. ^.^ keep it up. please update soon!
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Title: OOPS
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:23 CDT
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i found some spelling errors in my own review! Go me, the hypocrite! *laughs* yeah, well I meant to say that I like your -style-. So, yeah. But KrystalFox was right, you really do need to start new paragraphs for dialogue.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I like your stle, but i did notice some bad spelling... please continue with this... I really like it.
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Reviewed By: KrystalFox On: April 23, 2005 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic, but your style of writing is hurting my eyes! Everytime a new person speaks you need to start a new paragraph. It makes it a lot easier to understand and to read. However, very nice developement of the plot so far. You may want to develope the characters just a bit more though. Good job so far! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 08:14 CDT
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LOL! This was a very funny one. Wufei and Duo are sooo funny together. And it is so adorable how Duo worries over Heero....and what happened in the hummer. LoL I can't wait to see the next chap. What does Gedion (sorry if I spelled it wrong) plan on 'teaching' Heero anyways? Something good I hope.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 16:16 CDT
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Update! This is soo touching how the boys worry about Hee-chan so much. I still can't see how Heero gets caught after fighting two wars, but who cares. I like the story and that is all there is to it.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 20, 2005 08:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cool! Keep going, please! It's cute when the boys worry about each other, but weird when it's Heero that gets caught (it's usually Duo). I like this, so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 08:46 CDT
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Hey I like this one. Hope the guys make in time to save Heero! And kick that guards ass. Update soon!!
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