| "Mirror Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 15:50 CDT
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darnet..you never did continue this.... - pokes - or did you ??
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Reviewed By: evilchild (not signed in) On: July 07, 2005 09:30 CDT
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Do you know that you have ch 1 twice? Hurry with the next chapter! I think this story is pretty good so far but I'll get a better feel for it when I read the next chapter. :)
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Title: Oh Dear Lord...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! I think you've thought of a new thing here! I love it and you must continue...
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Reviewed By: MithrilDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! This has lots of potential! The only thing I can suggest is that having the inscription on the mirror twice in the same chapter is a bit redundant. Reading it in the beginning makes me want to skip over it in the middle of the story, and I almost missed the actions that are set in the middle of the words. Good luck, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Deli-Chan On: June 30, 2005 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
This could be a great fic. But it's too bothersome to try and read it, if you don't use alinea's. So I suggest you change that and then MAYBE, I can give you a good review (plus, you'd get tons of other reviews) 'cause without alinea's, you'll scare potentional readers/reviewers away.
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Reviewed By: PreyForRain On: April 22, 2005 22:17 CDT
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I'll try reading it when you fix it up. 'Till then.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 13:47 CDT
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Whoot! AU1 and AU2 rocks! I wanna see what happens next! Update soon!
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