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| "Love Long Forgotten (KakashixOC)" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lara Roberts [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 19:19 CDT
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They're finally together again! WoOt. *does a funny happy dance of excitment around desk folding chair* And the somewhat compromising position that Sakura saw them in was hilarious. Keep up the updating, and sorry about the leg.
| Title: Its me answering questions!!
Reviewed By: Naomi_saitoh_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 20:04 CDT
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helloo kyuubi sharingan~ ;] To answer your question: im not basing this on the actual naruto story; just sticking chiori in there with certain parts of the story so my fic wont be totally out of nowhere, yu know? She isnt even part of the real story obviously. I wanted the same story line as naruto, but with chiori stuck in it somewhere. So, this isnt something you wouldve known about already, since im just making stuff up and sticking ppl in random spots and stuff. Oh, and if you were to put my story into perspective with the actual naruto episodes... my story would be around episode 20, right when chuunin exam starts. But, I did want to tie the story in and let kakashi have some time with Chi, so im screwing around basically. YET, i am putting in some selected scenes from the actual anime. so.. shortened: its not based wholly on the anime, onli certain episodes. You know whyy?? cuz kakashi always so damnnned busy all the time!! So.. its necessary~ hope i answered ur question :]
| Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, another chapter so soon? I couldn't ask for more... I can only think of one thing to ask about. If the Third is still there, then wouldn't we have known about this already? This would have had to happen either before the Chuunin exam or during the one month period before the last leg of the exam. And if it happened during the latter, wouldn't Kakashi be with Sasuke then? I know I'm nagging, I just wanted to know why you placed this now... Anywho, lovely chapter ( I really can't wait until the next chapter! I hope it's soon!)
| Reviewed By: Lara Roberts [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey, another chapter! Keep up the great writing. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next.
| Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm happy that she's finally coming home.I understand where Loki's coming from too. I mean, I wouldn't want the person I love to go off and try to find out who this guy is that is lurking in their dreams - and they don't even know who the mysterious man is. Still, I want Chiori to get together with Kakashi... so no complaints.
| Title: Amanda
Reviewed By: Kyuubi_Sharingan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Every day that I come and look at the updates, I always hope that you will have updated this... I'm sorry 'bout your MM account. I hate it when things like that happen, though it's never happened for me here. I love the new chapter. I was hoping that she would see Kakashi, as I can't wait for them to get together. I'll see you next update (I hope it's soon)
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