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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) On: May 17, 2005 20:59 CDT
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Nice chapter!Finally ot avoiding each other anymore!cool choice of tatoo.....I myself could never be brave enough to get one.Anyways,god chapter,looking forward to the next one!
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 18:50 CDT
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Awe, I can imagine the pretty flower. ^^ I wonder how Lacey and Dad are going to take it, though. O.oU Anyway, it's alright that you miss a day here and there, we lova ya too much to stay angry with you. *hugs back* And in my opinion, pulling weeds, even the spiky ones, are better than cleaning dog or cat turd. X.x At least for me it's so. I have a sensitive stomach. ^^ Continue at will!
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Title: Whoa
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What a HAWT chapter! You tease! :hugs:
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Title: Everything You Want
Reviewed By: MeTaL_cHiCk04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story--written by a brilliant and talented new writer. I love how you incorporate different parts of your friends personalities into your writing. At least I assume you do because that is what I would do and quite frankly I'm a good judge of these kind of things. It must be great to have friends like that. Quirky and fun. Bella's character actually reminds me of this girl I know named Amber. She is brilliant, funny, quirky, spazzy, at times and my god so hot!! LMAO!! Yep. Must be great to have friends like that. Oh, one question though? Earlier in the story Bella described a disease that she thought she had. (You know, the part where Cole just dismisses Bella as being dramatic. Of course) Well, I was just wondering what it was called again because I think I might have it. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more. :)
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 20:20 CDT
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Wonderful chapter, and i love wehere this is going. ^^ Don't stop! And a tattoo? O.o Go Bella. I wonder if she's going to get yelled at. XD And thank you for forgiving me. I'll behave and review like a good little girl from now on. And yeah, the sequal is going to be great. ^^
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 22:47 CDT
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Sorry I didn't have time to review for te last chap. Damn comp won't behave on many sites. *beats it for being stupid* Anyway, I love the new developments, I just hope the pairings all turn out alright. As for me... *writes the sequal to my suicide story* XD
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 19:00 CDT
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Awe, this is sad. I hope Bella get it together soon. ;_; (coming from me, and I just wrote a suicide fic ^^U) Continue at will!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I was glad to read two more powerful chapters. Their relationship with all its ups and downs is surely interesting to read. Very moving.
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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) On: May 12, 2005 14:22 CDT
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that's so sad...and Derrick sound like s sick bastard........good chapter thought,very interesting and emotional.Keep it up :D
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 21:02 CDT
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The deception wasn't too obvious. He had me going for a while. @@ But anyway, I certainly wasn't expecting her to leave Cole. O.o Good plot twist there. Keep it up, tardy is always better than never!
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Title: AHH!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2005 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I did not see that coming with Derrick. Oh, man you left me hanging there girl! What are you going to do when Cole is being cold to her and Derrick betrays her? There's just one twist after another. Poor Bella...she should have been more trusting and tell Cole. BTW...Thanks for reading my stories. Glad you liked "Dinner Time." Hehehe...
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Reviewed By: Darkfire Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 19:18 CDT
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Wow, thisa is an awesome story. keep adding chapters, I'm loving this! I just hope thgings get sorted out.... Cause if not, I have a voodoo doll of Derrik ready for use. >=D
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Reviewed By: Amaria(not logged in) On: May 09, 2005 21:05 CDT
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Gah!Stupid me,I didn't read the new chapter's till now....very good!Well written,as always.
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Reviewed By: quirkyslayer (not signed in) On: May 09, 2005 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! It's getting good. I'm glad you threw Derrick in the mix again. It's very hard for people to get into a relationship and trust right away. I'm glad you're going to explore their trust for one another right now. Although, Bella lying will no doubt cause some problems for later on. Just what you intended, right? I really like this story. I don't mind to sound like a major shameless pimp, but when you get a chance, I'd like for you to look at my stuff as well. Well, good luck with the next chapter. I'll be waiting! *hugs*
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Title: YES!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! It's getting hotter! Woot! I really would review your stories sooner, but MediaMiner hates me and I can't always get to your chapters! But I swear I'll always read them! Good luck with the next chapter. I like how strong Bella is turning out to be. *hugs*
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