| "Anxiety" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: anxiety
Reviewed By: butterfli_kissez On: June 09, 2005 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i rated the way i did cause...I LOVE THIS STORY!! dont give up on this story, not that you would!! this work of art makes me happy:) overall, i love it! keep up the outragously great story! i did notice a few spelling errors but who cares! love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 {not signed in...too lazy} On: June 06, 2005 16:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great job keep it up and update soon:):):)
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Reviewed By: lynnie1_23 On: June 04, 2005 03:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
i lvoe the story but i've read one just like it on (ff). anyway i have a question.... in the first chapter..keade die a year before kyasha was born..but in chapter 16 u have keade walk in to check up on the child....what's up wit tat?
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Reviewed By: going-SuperNova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that is a good story i love it it is excellent update
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Reviewed By: inu-geri On: May 22, 2005 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. I love the way they found each other (even if it was slightly obvious...lol). can't wiat for your next chapters.
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Title: i know
Reviewed By: Reke On: May 18, 2005 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know rheas on the band trip to so bye for now and love the story!
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thats a pretty good story line..lovin it(Y) keep it up and update soon
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Title: edvis
Reviewed By: Reke On: May 10, 2005 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should give inuyasha and kyasha more clues on the on that i mean let them figer it out sooner okay it will make me happy! And dos Kagome figer it out soon please tell me she duz cas it is oves! o ya and a nuter tip if you make it comlexs okay but please (ON HANDS AND KNES BAGGING ALMOST IN TEARS) update soon i love the story so please up date soon! tanks from Reke ps: email me at emily.clee@fc.sd23.bc.ca with a anwer okay love ya bye talk to you later love ya bye!!!
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Title: email
Reviewed By: Reke On: May 09, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please lisn to my advis and email me at emily.clee@fc.sd23.bc.ca okay and i can only email you thro fan reveiws okay keep in tuch bye bye!!!
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Title: edvis
Reviewed By: Reke On: May 09, 2005 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas wright update soon i can only go on my computer for 2 and a half hours a day so please update and try droping more hintes on kyasha and inuyasha being related okay if you do I will review after every chapter okay bye bye!!!!
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Reviewed By: EquineBabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story..I think you should keep going and update soon!
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 (nsi) On: May 02, 2005 19:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good and I think that you should continue I know how you feel I have two poems out and They havent been review chech em out see if it's true that they suck ^~;; I gotta go for dinner but dont let anyone get you down It's a great story and anyone that says less is wrong Luv Ran-Chan
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Reviewed By: lackofname On: May 02, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good story. The only thing that bugs me is how many spaces you put at the end ;) Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Jason C On: May 02, 2005 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good story
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Title: Anxiety
Reviewed By: Sesshomarus_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 15:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not bad update soon.
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