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| "Unbound Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Very Good! ^_^
Reviewed By: animegeekfreak18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your writing style, and I like how you did this plot of a story! ^_^ I especially like the part where the hut things fell apart XD that was hilarious! Teehee, well thank you for writing! and Hopefully you'll write more! Until Next Time! ~Animegeekfreak18
| Title: Wow! ^_^
Reviewed By: fluffysprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've seen the anime series, but I don't have any of the manga yet. I loved HaruToki from the first moment I saw it. I like how you have set the tone and captured the characters of Akane and Yorihisa - it's just so...sugoi! LOL And what would poor Yorihisa do if she called him Yorihisa, instead of Yorihisa-san?! ^_~ And for that matter, what would the rest of the Hachiyo, especially Tenma, do?
| Title: Lovely Fic
Reviewed By: Veramosa On: May 08, 2005 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet. First Yorihisa/Akane fic I've read. Hell, it's the first het Haruka fic I've seen! You get a dozen pluses for that alone. And it was wonderfully done, so unexpected. Good grammar, emotionally pulling, nice blend of humor and romance. I absolutely loved the lean-to scene when it went tumbling! Actually, I'm surprised you haven't got more hits for the story, or even more reviews for that matter. Some people are just jerks to read and not say anything. But, anyway, I hope you write more Haruka fics in the future!
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