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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2005 19:55 CDT
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*reads response to Kiki14's review* hmm, i wanna hiei plushie... cheesecake*drool* lol. i really liked this chapter, it was really long. stupid kurama, you shoulda left the romance in there*pokes kurama with toothpick and glares evily at him* you should never take a girl away from her romances. baka kitsune. anywho, please make another chapter soon, can't wait^.^ p.s. my condolences to ayame for her attire lol~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: kiki14 On: June 21, 2005 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to make this quick cause I'm getting kicked off the computer. But, I really love your story and hope to read more. Although if Ayame and Miirei (is that how you spell it?) don't end up with the people I want them to end up with I'll be distraught! But then what do you do? And also am I really supposed to guess your ages? Well you writing skills are superb... though that doesn't always pertain to your age. And you always seem quite... hyper and rather goofy, the both of you. So... my quess is 14/15? Maybe? I myself am 14, and usually act in a similar manner. (Though never on the web... well, okay sometimes I do...) Wow, this isn't turning out to be such a "short" review. Lol. Anyway I really like your fan fic, it's hard to find fan fiction that actually has more than 2 chapters in it. Yours is one of the longer ones. I have enjoyed it more than you know. You said that the pairings weren't as obvious as they seemed. But, who else could Miirei fall for other than Kurama? I hope Ayame falls for Hiei, he fits all the qualities that were mentioned earlier in the fic. But, so far he only seems to like her when she's bleeding. Wow, I'm running out of room. I better come to an conclusion... I was really chatty today. Gomen. Well, I love your story and I hope you update soon because I will be waiting at my computer until you do! Toodles!
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 13:49 CDT
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my exams are over now so i will be able to review your stories as soon as they come out^.^ can't wait for the next chapter~~TTFN^.^~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read it yesterday but dident get the chance to revev un till today. nice chapy please up date soon
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 14:56 CDT
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omg sounds like you got hit good. I shall help you get revenge. hmm... maybe you can confuse them with linguistic skills and then annoy them to death be making fun of how they laugh and talk by using an overly annoying voice that is suppost be theirs. trust me, it works lol, well for me anyway. Hope you get some good revenge somehow^.^~Vadkakid~
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Title: REVIEW!!
Reviewed By: Kakarot45 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You reviewed me and now I'll review you, again! Love your story and don't mind you advertising on my story! ^__^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i liked the ending part with the heat thang...... ok i amit i need to get my mind out of the gutter. cant what for the next one. see you next time space cowboy
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Reviewed By: vadkakid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 21:44 CDT
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wow i havent reviewed in a while. sorry-.-;; anyway, to make up for it, here's a homemade chocolate chip cookie*gives you a cookie* he he^.^ Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter^.^~Vadkakid~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please up date this one i want to read the next chapy soon
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Title: Under Construction
Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 12:42 CDT
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Wow...lately I have been reading your chapters and the story is going great! I love it. Oh and yaoi and yuri fics are rather....awkward...especially yaoi because I saw to gay guys kissing each other on Next on MTV and omg it looked like two pieces of sand paper smearing on each other. It was weird...anyways I told my bf and he was like....I didn't need to know that. It freaks guys out you should try it. But back to the review. The story is really good and I like the different colored eyes because I used to have a cat like that. I like the whole cat-demon idea and I like it how you can only WANT to be pregnant so you could have sex all you want not that I am a slut but is seems like a dream come true not to get preg. and that is nasty to have little shits run around and....*sigh* I hate kids. One more thing. I am glad that Hiei isn't WAY out of character like he is on most fics and the last chap was awkward...bloodlust well it did seem like he was hungry for some blood. So was he just a messed up Hiei or was he just bored and felt like freaking ppl out. ^_~ lol. Well great story so far and UPDATE SOON!!!! ~InTheShadows~
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im glade its not going to ba a yaoi and yuri fic. im not that crazy about them.... please up date soon i want to read more
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Title: love you'r story
Reviewed By: gold moon On: June 05, 2005 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. it's so cool!! i hope you can update it more often.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: colorless egyptian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Although, I'm more of a yaoi fan, I think this story has a lot of potential. You should write some more fics, if you're up to it. I'll R & R every one you post. Well, that's it, I guess. See ya!
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 10:00 CDT
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Oh Yah! Shounen: Boy Shoujo:Girl. Basicly thats Hiei's nickname for Ayame because she smaller then him, it's also an insult because he's comparing her to a child.
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Reviewed By: Araxiel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 09:58 CDT
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Ash: Yup, i've only worn a skirt once in my life, i was forced to by my evil mother, i've been able to sneak into my friend's school and use the computers, i even borrowed his school uniform XD I wonder what will happen when they find out i don't go to his school, i've allready been in three of his lessons without them realizing, it's now lunch time, Alex's off somewhere with sean getting lunch, yup, she here aswell, in anothe spare uniform, she stole someone else blazer XD I can't upload a chapter of the story at the moment, but as soon as i get home i will. Ah! Alex and Sean are back, with pizza! hehehe. Alex: Well Ash has gone after the pizza, we started to write out the chapter on the computer, but people kept on coming over, and in Ash's mad attempt to hide the story, she deleted it, crazy onna. Ash:Shutup you! Alex:*laughs* Well, we should be back in a few day, so you lovely reviewers, and you morons that are jst reading the story without reveiwing, should have another chapter.
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