| "Genuine Desires : Unity" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: JSN On: July 28, 2006 14:25 CDT
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Um, have you noticed that you wrote "Natasha" instead of "Inuyasha" at the end of the first chapter...?
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Reviewed By: I HATE U On: February 14, 2006 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE U, WHY WONT YOU UPDATE. update soo.LOVE YA!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_candy216 On: February 14, 2006 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon.lov it
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Reviewed By: UpDaTe! On: February 14, 2006 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON . LOOKING GOOD
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: inu_and_kagome_4ever On: December 17, 2005 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS PLS UPDATE A.S.A.p pls PLS PLS PLS UPDATE BECAUSE I LOVE THE STORY
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Reviewed By: Angellips On: December 03, 2005 07:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Very well written :) I just discovered your story and am really enjoying it! I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for non reviewing, i've been reading this story and kept checking to see if u update, and when u do i read it. SORRY. but i LOVE it soooooo much!!!! pwease, pwease pwease, HURRY......UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: POOR INUYASHA On: November 15, 2005 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor inuyasha. WHEN ARE U GOING 2 UPDATE MAKE IT SOON BECAUSE I CANT WAIT 1 MORE MIN. UPDATE
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Reviewed By: iluvsesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. It's very good and it keeps you on the edge of your seat. I think you did an amazing job on it. I hope to hear of more sories from you soon.
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Title: j
Reviewed By: J On: November 05, 2005 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well I really liked the begining and it was a great start. However, I am really really confused and lost in the last two chapters. What happened? It is really very confusing and doesn't make sense to me. And I really got lost at that once a upon a time bit. Where is that going to I just didnt get the connection. Please I like the story but please clarify what exactly is suppose to be the point in the last two chapters cause I really want to understand what I was suppose to get. I just didnt get the point of the last two chapters. I hope you will explain it. thanks. J
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Reviewed By: pickle juice On: November 03, 2005 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your story. You really are an amazing writer. The way you described things I would have guessed you were grown up. I really love you story and I'll read as you updat!~*
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Reviewed By: Inu Fan05 On: September 30, 2005 03:54 CDT
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you just had to end that last chapter like that? i hate cliffies. anyway, it's a great story so far. keep up the great work. i look forward to the next chapter. btw, did you get the Lord's last name from YYH? keep the great work. till next time, bye!
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: September 30, 2005 00:22 CDT
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Do you by any chance know how long it takes to read 16 chapters......but i couldn't stop. i didn't even take the time to review after each chapter because it took to long....by the way i love this story, and have put you on my fav list. please update soon.
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Title: This is...
Reviewed By: hotstffdorryPR On: September 11, 2005 15:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, c'mon! u have to do part 2! i thought all of your other chapters were fantastic! plz, write more!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Selina On: September 06, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update I just got the story And i love It So please update. Best story .
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