| "InuYasha's Strength" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: kina12 On: September 16, 2005 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW one of the most amazing fics ive read ever,thers passion,suspence,angst,everything! KEEP WRITING!in the 20th chapter, did Inuyahsa really sleep with Sango? i didnt really get it,but i guess i understand if he did..it kind of left me clueless..
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Reviewed By: Vampiress_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2005 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is please update soon
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Title: Ganbatte!
Reviewed By: His Lordship Entropy On: July 14, 2005 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This review was written as of the Chapter 16 update. As your recently-acquired so-called 'editor', I have to say I could have done a better job on that last one (#16). At any rate, I don't believe I've commented on your work as of yet, so here goes: Writing style gets a 9 -- there were a few awkwardly executed parts, but I'm well aware of the state you're in while writing, so that's a secondary concern. Otherwise, very well done. Spelling and Grammar...definitely some things I missed when I skimmed that last part. I'm holding myself responsible, there. Originality/Creativity...Wow. 'Nuff said. Enjoyment Factor: It doesn't get much darker than this, but the story is no less riveting for it. This has to go up as one of the better -- perhaps among the best -- InuYasha fan fictions I've seen. I'm no connoisseur, but I'd like to think I've some decent reading experience. *shrug* Congratulations are in order for a job well done, so far. "Do good work, and keep in touch." As always, God be with you. -Entropy- (No, I'm not using _that_ name this time. *mock glower*)
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Title: you
Reviewed By: kagome182005 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 20:35 CDT
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you evil cruel person!! Oh dare you!! *starts to cry* if, if they die, I'm taking this story of my favorites!!! *bloes nose*
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Title: that was so good
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 29, 2005 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude I cried on that last chapter, it was so heart warming. YOU BETTER LET INUYASHA GO!!! Or I will call the police saying that you are holding him hostage!! Lawyers will be swarming your house in a matter of hours. Good bye........
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 08:01 CDT
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sorry I didn't review to the last chapters... sooooo sad but they're all nice, I love them ^^! Please keep it up!
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Title: sniff sniff
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 23, 2005 16:20 CDT
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that was so good. *sniff* i cried. *grabs a tissue box and blows nose* you better update soon. *starts crying again while grabiing another tissue* damn i need more tissues!!
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Title: it is so sad
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 14, 2005 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so sad. my story ya know the boy who found love? well someone deleted it. it was not me, i was so proud of my reviews and all so i had decided to keep it, but someone deleted it!! it is so sad.
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Title: do you want me to leave??
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 08, 2005 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you want me to leave because i'm the only one who gives you reviews,well and that other person. good name though.I guess,I'm not going to be reading the rest of this story. better find a new one. good bye!!! (sob sniff such a good story too!!) Damn!! I told myself i would'nt cry!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 11:28 CDT
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Wow! interesting chapter... hurry back Inu! I can't wait to read more ^^
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Title: DAMN YOU!!!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 05, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN YOU!!! You are so evil i mean a cliffie, OF ALL THE DAMN PLACES!!!! THERE WHEN HER WATER BREAKS!!!!! Still wht the heck is her name going to be?? Oh yeah, good chappie!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 09:41 CDT
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soooo... Sango's baby now is born ^^ Soon, we'll see Kagome's child I hope! And Naraku.... that evil bastard, what is he plotting? keep writing please ^^
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 04, 2005 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Taro, I like it, but you didn't tell me what Kagome and Inuyasha's baby's name was going to be!! But why did she almost faint when the baby was born? And why was Narku there? And in the other chapter why did you make Narku rape that girl in the form of Inuyasha??!! You are evil, what do you have planned for this story? Oh and good story!! Thank you for deticating that chapter for me!! Nobody has ever done that for me. Thanks you!!!
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Title: Hurry!!
Reviewed By: kagome182005 (not signed in yet) On: May 03, 2005 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hay this is a good story I am already hooked. But I was just wondering, what are you going to name Sango and Miroku's baby? Or Inuyasha kagome's? Please the suspense is killing me!! See see I dieing!!
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 12:10 CDT
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so... this is how they met.. well, interesting ^^ love works in a strange way. Please keep writing! ^^
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