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Title: Aethia
Reviewed By: Aethia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hawt damn. XD
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sexy chappie. i am sitting here freaking out, wondering what the hell is gonna happen when either kag finds out, or inu's guilt or conscience catches up with him. this is getting good. i am guessing naraku will turn out to be the worst/best thing that could happen to inu. but i could be wrong. thanx and please post a new chap when you can.
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 08:08 CDT
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How long do you plan on making me wait for an update? These are the horniest gay men I have ever seen, lol. I wasn't exactly thrown for a loop because I know fuck parties happen all the time in gay, straight, bi, you name it communities. It's hot action... I feel Inuyasha's guilt as if it were my own, it was well thought out and written.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! man, i've never been too sure about nar/inu pairings, but i'm willing to give it a chance. cant wait for the next update. post it when you have the time.
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Reviewed By: bishieboylove On: July 15, 2005 13:37 CDT
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squeals you updated. now update again!LOL! :::::::::melts in puddle of wetness::::: i love this story its hot and kinky. hiten blowing koga was so hot. is inuyasha going to back out? please dont let him, naraku needs to slam into the horny puppy. I DEMAND THAT YOU UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 21:52 CDT
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fans self) omg... that's so hot... first of all, let me address the ton of hentai that just blew (get it, get it) my... mind... ^_^ now, that blow job, that was so hot. have you been lying to me, do you have a dick you play with? sheesh, it's almost like it's your own dick getting sucked off (i found myself wanting to have a dick so it could be blown like that... ) continuing on because this story is so much more than just the sex (although i'm not going to complain about it!) i love the wave of guilt that attacked inu-chan when he thought about his wife. he is technically cheating on her and he should be having guilty feelings about it, but fuck! i'm encouraging it. i can't wait to see naraku pound into inu-chan, who is sure to love it. i mean, this is a great story and i can't wait to read more from it. it's great! i love it! you know that, ne? i love the guilt you put inu through, it's very realistic and it's very true. i love you for this story, ne? great job! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot drools.
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONTINUE pls!!
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Reviewed By: Lucient not signed in On: June 29, 2005 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not normally one for abnormal pairings, but this is seductive, dangerous and exotic. It's a potent cocktail of "what if" and betrayal. It's so well written. :) RYN: I'm glad you enjoyed my weird story. I didn't notice there was no dialogue until you said something, lol. I could have elongated it, and I may in the future, but that was how it was written 4 years ago.
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Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not a better Yaoi writer out there than you Youkai.can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: bishieboylove On: May 26, 2005 06:31 CDT
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such sweet horneyiness naraku was feeling up inuyasha. drools over koga spanking hiten.(that was so kinky anf hot)will he be spanking him s'more? (crys) you did evil cliffies again UPDATE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou, not signed in but enjoying the smut anyways On: May 24, 2005 08:27 CDT
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well... first of all let me say that i am loving this story. it's got a lot of great things going on in it and i'm loving it! i love the relutance that inuyasha is going through and what's happening with he and naraku. i love the way he avoided going to his house to avoid letting naraku know he was married. niceness. and... am i sensing some angsty fights coming up with hiten and inu-chan over kouga? (drool) i can't wait for the next update! it's going to be good. and... that paddle was awful familiar...
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Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: bishieboylove On: May 04, 2005 06:18 CDT
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drools like a dog, how hot was that between koga and hiten.you need to update soon, because if you dont i will release my wrath on you. evil cliffies, i hate them so. UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:20 CDT
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(and the crowd goes wild waiting for more!) this is a great start to a dark story and i can't wait to see what happens with naraku and inu-chan. i really liked how you portrayed inu's unwillingness to be unfaithful to his wife, but his need to do it too. i liked the hesitation that he felt, the realistic pain he was suffering because of his decision to be with other men while kagome's away. now, how will that affect his future, how does that lead to the darkness (hentai thoughts fill mind as thoughts of wild yaoi and hardcore yaoi fills head... *drool*)
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