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Reviewed By: Puppet Master [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: bishieboylove On: May 04, 2005 06:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
drools like a dog, how hot was that between koga and hiten.you need to update soon, because if you dont i will release my wrath on you. evil cliffies, i hate them so. UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
(and the crowd goes wild waiting for more!) this is a great start to a dark story and i can't wait to see what happens with naraku and inu-chan. i really liked how you portrayed inu's unwillingness to be unfaithful to his wife, but his need to do it too. i liked the hesitation that he felt, the realistic pain he was suffering because of his decision to be with other men while kagome's away. now, how will that affect his future, how does that lead to the darkness (hentai thoughts fill mind as thoughts of wild yaoi and hardcore yaoi fills head... *drool*)
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