| "Dragon Ball VE: The Keeper Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] |
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Title: fuck
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2011 05:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I usually don't write reviews, but I feel that this story warrants one. Amazing. Moving. This really gets my emotions running. :) |
Reviewed By: picaresque [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 13:45 EST
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I love this story...I read it all in one sitting! I'd love to read the next part but I can't seem to find it?
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Reviewed By: MizuSasuke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 12:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favourite part was when Vegeta and Gohan were communicating in thought speak. It was quite intertaining to read. I miss the old Goku though... hopefully he will come back! I was a little disapointed though with the whole "Vegeta gets raped by Frieza" thing. It's a little cliche. (and I'm usually reluctant to read fanfics about Vegata having other kids, or his kids from the future (it's been done a little too often)) but that's just me ^-^. Most of the characters are a bit too OC for my taste, but that's the beauty of Fanfiction I guess. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the saga.
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Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok, I feel like I'm cheating since I co-wrote this with you, but I love this fic. :) I love reading it, and I love writing it. And I'm glad your muse is back because I missed working on it with you! (So I'm glad we're going to start working again on the next Saga - I'm looking forward to it!)
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Reviewed By: Hunny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you're preparing us for the sequel!?!?! I read this some time ago (and re-read it), and I've been dying to find out what happens next. Please don't hold us in suspense too long!
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Reviewed By: trunks2016 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 00:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normaly I really don't like these Kind of Fanfics but when I started reading this one I was pulled in and was very pleased that it stayed with the origanal charicters, & pleasently saw new ones. The story was great, consept was outstanding, I truly enjoyed this story. My complements to the writter, & I hope to see more of the same. Great Job!!!
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Reviewed By: lightning683 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 21:32 EDT
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man this is an awesome story. i love how you got away from the " abomination that is GT". keep up the good work and update soon
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: fire_senshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I'm so happy you updated! I also can't wait for the next sagas!! Absolutly amazing! Keep it up!!
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Title: update!!
Reviewed By: fire_senshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 17:52 EDT
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I'm so sad that this story hasn't been updated in so long!!! *tear* I really hope that you do not quit writing this fic...it is so amazingly awesome!! please don't stop and update as soon as you can!! much love!!
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Reviewed By: Caralin Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 18:41 EDT
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I can't believe my good fortune in discovering this excellent fic!!! I am sure psyched that I have found a quality written DBZ story and feel even luckier that the tale focuses on my favorite character, Vegeta. Your story is well-told with amazing characterization with a truly inspired plot...and best of all it allows Vegeta to play a major role. I am curious about this Saiyan baby girl Vegeta has brought back with him and I wonder if Bulma will ever except the child? As a mother and wife I can only guess that she will in time love the pure blood Saiyan girl, she is a part of Vegeta, after-all. Oh...and how gross when Kiddae actually ate Vegeta's eyeball...very twisted but fascinating as well. I hope to see an update soon. I am hooked and highly anticipate to hear more from you and Mia Skywalker both. Caralin Fury
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Reviewed By: inugeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOOO HOOOO!! Great story. I just came across it and wow. Thanks for skipping that GT bu**sh**. Those are pure crap. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: fire_senshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome job! I really like this story. I don't read many DBZ fics, (mainly cuz they suck) but this one is amazing! Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: gina18 On: July 05, 2005 01:34 EDT
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I really love this fic. It is so interesting. Can`t wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Very enjoyable
Reviewed By: thoughts On: June 29, 2005 21:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm intrigued and looking forward to the next section. There are lots of interesting threads you have left dangling that I'm excited to learn about: 1) what happened to Gohan and Vegeta 2) how will Bulma react when Vegeta gets back 3) what is up with Pan and why is Gohan so upset with her? 4) what happened to Videl -- 5) how much older are Gohan and Bra? 6) who are the shadows ? 7) what happens with the Keepers All very intriguing. I'm also glad that you had a "not bad" Keeper although I'm not 100% sure that that is true. It is all very intriguing and I know I will end up following this story to its conclusion. Thanks for a great story.
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Title: any more
Reviewed By: Blusher On: June 26, 2005 13:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just ate it. it's different. any chance of a update?
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