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Reviewed By: QueenBowie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story immensely! I was happy to accept the ever-so-static Sesshoumaru becoming more dynamic, without losing his impressiveness and strength. *Pauses to drool over the bishie goodness* The pairing of Sesshy and Miroku was unexpectedly believable and, most importantly, the lemony bits in this telling added to the story, rather than becoming it. I was sad to see it end, but in a way, I couldn't imagine it being any better ... *Cheers*
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Title: It's over
Reviewed By: Rebecca O. On: July 25, 2005 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome ending. I would glomp you for ending it on a happy note but you're probably sore from getting so many. So a mental glomp for you. Thank you for keeping Sesshomaruand Miroku together and for keeping Kagome and Inuyasha together. I'm glad she can finally concentrate on school now.
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Reviewed By: momiji_sohma_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2005 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! You write so well! I just don't want the story to end! Please don't make me suffer! anyway, I love the sesshi/miroku pairing, and I plan on reading some of your other stories as well. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: zzoaozz [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This just keeps getting better and better, I love to see that update notice in my mail. ^.^
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Title: You couldn't resist
Reviewed By: Rebecca O. On: July 11, 2005 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is so engaging. You really bring Sesshomaru to life. I'm really rooting for him even though I like Sango. I wish Miroku could have them both but I don't see how. I like how you saved Kohaku. I also like how you explained the origin of the word Banpaia; Kagome started it. You just couldn't resist bringing vampires into it could you? :-)~ That was a great part. Keep it up I can't wait to see who ends up with whom and all that.
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Reviewed By: Rebecca O. On: July 05, 2005 20:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far. I don't have time to read it all right now but I'll give you more reviews as I do. I don't think I ever could have come up with a way to bring Sesshomaru and Miroku together but you made it seem effortless. Anyway more reviews to come I promise.
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Reviewed By: FrustratedPhoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2005 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"he did have the strongest draw towards the strangest butts sometimes" -- Yup, that's Miroku alright.
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Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like where you're going with this. I like how you fit a great deal of canon anime plot in the latest chapters with the woman who loved Sesshoumaru, and with Kagura. Thank you so very much for sparing Kohaku. I have to say the way you had Sango "get over" Miroku was pure Sango, and very IC. Thank you very much, and please continue with your story. >>>>>>>>>>Kin-chan Pandun. ............................... ... ................................. PS: The writing style here reminds me greatly of The White Dog by Becky Tailweaver (which is a great fic). I was wondering if you have read that fanfiction?
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Title: Review Chapter Sixteen
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! *giggles* That scene with Rin becoming Miroku's daughter was so cuuuute! Oh my gosh, that was just adorable! *claps hands in joy, giggling like a schoolgirl* ................ *squeals* I can't get over it! It was soooo adorable! *ah-hem* Sorry. Please continue, Kin-chan Pandun
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Title: Review Chapter Thirteen
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I really like this story, but what's with the character thoughts and confessions sounding like cheesy romance song lyrics? It's my ONLY beef with this fic. It sounds really dumb. Nothing like that would happen in real life, and there isn't even any basis for them acting/thinking like that in the manga or anime. It reminds me of top 40 songs, Tatewaki Kuno, and general falsehood. nothing so cheesy can be real. ...................... On the other hand, I really like your story. I like the plot and (on the whole) I like your caracterizations. Please keep up the good work. Please amend the cheesy italics (unless they're a stylistic thing, then go for it). >>>>>>>>>>>>>Luck! Kin-chan Pandun
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday On: June 14, 2005 14:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! YAY!!! *does happy dance* the code is changed!!! now it's purely Sess/Miroku!!! hehehe!!! *jumps around**giggle* oops.. i hadn't meant to type that... but anyway, excellent fic!! still my #1!!!
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday On: June 10, 2005 15:19 CDT
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OMG!!! i just realized that the first fanart thingie is yours!! that is such a good drawing of miroku; he looks so cute!! sesshomaru's hair is really poofy, but it's hard to draw his bangs. i've tried, and i can never get the hair right... long anime hair is such a pain in the ass to draw... oh yeah, and the story is progressing nicely too. BYZ!!
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:19 CDT
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YAY!! you updated really fast!! also, interesting turn of events with Rin... now one of miroku's problems of being with sesshy have been fixed!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 16:54 CDT
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hello again!! please continue the fic (it would also be nice if sesshy and miroku were together..., but whatever you choose i'll keep reading!!) update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday On: May 30, 2005 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sess/miro= totally awesome. (: miro/sango= SUX. /% (i can't figure out how to make an angry face with the keyboard...) this is like.. the only sess/miro pairing that i have ever seen... i love the pairing sooo much (very original). don't split them up.. please?? *puppy dog eyes*??
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