| "Inner Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update-chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to read what they did to Kagome and how she gets out of the mess she is in. Think Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke/Kurama or any one of them with Kagome
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Reviewed By: Snow Ahrima On: March 16, 2007 04:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm only to chapter 9 and I think I have this figured out but I have to say either way this could go will make for a good ending to a good fic. I just wanted to say that this is one of the few fics that I've made an effort to read in a long time but that is only because of the pairing and how it's writen. Keep up the good work. If this is complete then your next fic.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 03:29 CST
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Hi sweety!!!(waves flamboyantly) Yes its your ever loving MaxMan (As in Themaxman) i justhave to say AWESOME job(poses like the geek she is)MUAH ta ta!
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Reviewed By: Hopelessly Hopefull [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 01:38 CST
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this story is absolutely amazing so far and i can wait for you to conitnue! much love always, hope xxx
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 15:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job! Update asap please! what are the pairings?
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
A new chapter -- yay! Can't wait to find out what exactly happened to Kagome and who the other one Dark was talking about is. Will Kaze's identity be revealed? You say you've got pairings in mind. I hope you're thinking Kagome/Hiei. If not, I hope you're NOT thinking Hiei/Sango. (Can't stand Hiei with anyone else but Kagome!) Of course, I know you had an earlier moment or two with Kag/Yusuke. Anyway, looking forward to seeing what you have in mind!
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story!!! Can't wait for the next update!!! I'll be waiting till then!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm really enjoying the way you have the events playing out. Got any pairings in mind? Will there be a face-off with Naraku? Will the futuristic teens have to return to the future soon? Any Kag/Inu fluff? Kouga or Sess going to show up? Oh, the possibilities are endless, and I can't wait to see what you have in mind! Great job! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 17:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! Keep up the great work and update asap please! :P
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is good! I can't wait to read more! I hope you find time to update soon!!!
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Title: chapter 9
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: August 02, 2006 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what Puu knows as well as Kurama that no one else knows. Could it be Yusuke/Kagome for this story?
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Reviewed By: I killed my brain watching tv On: July 01, 2006 06:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story since I barely see YusukexKagome fics around so I enjoy this one and it is totally awesome how you had Kags and Yusuke enjoy a little alone time. I love this story and don't stop writing for it cause its great.
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Title: inner demons
Reviewed By: artic wolf On: June 07, 2006 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story a lot and i dont say that about a lot of things, even ask my friends. But one thing about the dominance chapter is that if inuyasha really tried to attack kagome, she could just keep telling him to sit untill he gave up. Also i think that maybe if you put in a little romance between kagome and yusuke thing would get a little more interesting with yusuke and inuyasha. And what is pu a phonix or a youki that can turn into a phonix?^.^ looking forward to reading the rest.
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