| "Love Hurts" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: sailor_jupiter22 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2008 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I would really like to see what happens next.
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Title: Love Hurts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: ok
Reviewed By: Writer_unda_H20 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story started out really well, an original idea, great perspective but as it continued it became sloppy and sort of a rant. I think ou might want to get an editor not just for your spelling and grammar but to help you keep track of your original story line and development. There's a lot of potential but it's not quite as good as it could be yet.
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Title: Love Hurts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: T.I On: September 27, 2005 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
serena and andrew ew! your story is rather interesting though as much as i like it i want you to please have sere and dare back together.
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Title: Love Hurts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2005 17:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: TaintedDesires On: September 25, 2005 21:24 CDT
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I say Serena and Darien all the way~ There jus the perfect couple, but do make Darien beg for Serena's forgiveness xD
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Reviewed By: TI On: September 24, 2005 03:29 CDT
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My turn. I agree with my five friends right here. Serena and Darien all the way. aint no betther couple. booya
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Reviewed By: Joice On: September 24, 2005 03:25 CDT
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I vote for serena and Darian together!
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Reviewed By: nerva On: September 24, 2005 03:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
me Serena and Darrien fan and i'd like to see it end happily for them
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Reviewed By: brenda A On: September 24, 2005 03:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please don't seperate serena and darien. I love those two. give them a happy ending.
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Reviewed By: pinkmooncrystal On: September 24, 2005 03:20 CDT
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I want serena and darien to be together!!!!
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Reviewed By: pinkmooncrystal On: September 24, 2005 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want serena and darien to be together!!!!
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Title: serena and darien
Reviewed By: celestial samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2005 03:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
do not i repeat do not make serena get together with someone else. there is no better sm couple that serena and darien
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Title: Love Hurts
Reviewed By: Geri On: September 02, 2005 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!!...even though its very sad and brought tears to my eyes. They should be together even though DArien, in this case, doent deserve her. So hurry and write the next chapter because I know people cant wait to read it!
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