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| "Demons, Inc." Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: May 13, 2005 22:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh.My.God. What in the fuck were you smoking when you were writing this chapter? I've been trying to act completely emotionless all day so my grandma can't find a weak spot, and then I started reading you chapter and I was like "...giggle...hahahahahaha...what a freak...giggle...scary spiders...hahaha..." You and Bastard!!! ruin everything!!!! Hahahaha. (By Bastard!!! I mean the anime--every time someone says "Dark Schneider" it makes me laugh like an idiot. They say it like "Dawk Sssshhhniduh" and it cracks me up.) Anyways. Very weird, but very gigglenessish. Keep it up and happy writing! ~Xaenthe
| Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 12:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, it's such a twist to have demons having superstitions about humans. Good work
| Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: May 12, 2005 00:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha you had me in stitches! Actually better than Monster's Inc, which, by the way, I love. The mental image of InuYasha squirming on the floor trying to get Kagome's snot-dribble off...priceless. I eagerly await your update. Happy writing! ~Xaenthe P.S. By the way, it's Bermuda, not Bremuda. Only fault I found in your first chapter. :)
| Title: AMAZING!!!
Reviewed By: inu-ears On: May 11, 2005 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG DEAR GOD!!! THAT IS AMAZING!! I TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!! PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON!!!! MAN THIS IS AN AWESOME IDEA!! KEEP IT GOING AND I'LL PUT IT ON MY WEBSITE!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! WOO-HOO! HTTP://AKAIKOKORO.KUROI-HOSHI.ORG/
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