"The Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: yuyuzlova [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 13:36 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: This is the worst fanfiction I have ever gotten the chance to read. Please stop it, you're embarrassing yourself and everyone around you. Your idiocy and absolute obsession with homosexuality is sickening. In fact, his fic has actually made me give up the fandom alltogether.
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Reviewed By: Dark Flame Erosion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 02:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: whoo..very dark...amzing portrayal of charcters, and descriptions. i like it. -lazy fat kitsune:)
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Reviewed By: stix On: September 21, 2005 20:40 CDT Comment/Review: please update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: stix On: August 12, 2005 20:20 CDT Comment/Review: i loved this story. it was so great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: DarkWanderer On: July 26, 2005 01:57 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great! I absolutely loved it! Whelp, I'm off to read the sequel!
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Reviewed By: Kuranga108 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2005 02:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: dude!!! i can't believe i never realized you had posted this one here! i would have been come over to reviewe instead of wasting my time at ff.net! this was an awesome end to the story! i loved it! and now i'm gonna go read the sequel! great job!!!!!
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Title: What no "we're back together chapter Reviewed By: Kerbear On: July 12, 2005 22:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: What do you mean chapter 8 is the end!? What happens next,does Kurama at least open up and remember who Hiei is and how about his mom.Not A Nice Way To End THIS at All.
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Reviewed By: Blue Utopiah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 23:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm such a big KarasuXKurama torture fan (and a big KuramaXHiei fan) and there's so little good stories about them out there. This is one of them. Very dark. I loved the scene where Karasu fed Kurama the aphrodisiac, and I love how Karasu has writen on the walls in blood. Beautiful, just beautiful. Please, write more!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 19:59 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Truly an explosive climax, very appropriate for the upcoming holiday. I loved the difficulty of the battle, but especially the clever way Kurama, even barely sane, used the "wards" of his captor, combined with his own powers, to defeat Karasu -- and the relatively quiet climax of Hiei's ending the battle. I am delighted that there will soon be a sequel, and hope that with enough sleep and comfort, Kurama will fully recover.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2005 14:49 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good ending, can't wait to read the sequel. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Tsujita_91(NLI) On: June 28, 2005 13:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHRRRRGGGGG!!!!!!!! Sequel! Yes! Sequel Good! Seriously, I love the way the last scene is written from Kurama's POV. That was sad! Poor Kurama!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 19:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Welcome back, I've greatly anticipated the new chapter and you do not disappoint. I loved Hiei's matter of fact response to his injury, and the careful way in which Yusuke asked his questions. The sudden juxstaposition of Kurama's emotions had just the right effect. I hope Kurama will survive his rescue, and look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 17:44 CDT Comment/Review: I agree, bunny is tasty. Now let me see... I'm guessing Hiei is going to do alot more second guessing about how much he deserves Kurama. Rough times ahead I am certain. Hopefully they make Karasu beg for mercy before giving him a prolonged, gruesome death. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: nli On: June 16, 2005 11:36 CDT Comment/Review: Hm. Not exactly hot; more like...depressing. I'm interested to see what happens next, though!
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 15:18 CDT Comment/Review: Quite interesting, I see no reason for reporting. After all lemons are allowed on this site thankfully. FF.net drives me nuts in the regard. It's a pain in the ass to have to edit out controversal stuff in my own stories for them. I liked what you did with this chapter, hopefully he will be able to forgive himself for what he has done. Update soon please.
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