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Title: wowzer
Reviewed By: TiannaBannana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i really love this fic its so great, your lucky only 9 days, i espicially like the part of Manbeast bashing and Kouga bashing. i hate them both they deserve eachother also its cool how kirara is a human in this one, plz update soon it rox
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 22, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting to be a very interesting story. I love what you've done to Manbeast lol! That is such an appropriate name for that ?*!@$. Just some words to the wise watch you spelling on some words. It ain't a major problem it's just a little more difficult to read some sentences. Keep up the good work. Ja ne!
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLovELorn (nsi sry) On: May 22, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww..... lmao keep up the good work and update again soon please? sorry to hear your grounded that must suck! well keep up your good work!
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Title: -gawk-
Reviewed By: InbuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 21, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-mouth wide open- *gawk* only 9 days? dammit i've got like 15 this sucks!!!!! where do you live i'm moving there!!!!! ^__^ lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Rain_Angel_22 On: May 18, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good,i just have one problem.When writing a Fanfic,you shouldnt put your own little notes in.It kinda takes away from the story,cause i was getting into it.And then i see your little message,lol.it's ok.since it was your first one.Good Job.And good story.^_^
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