| "What Could Happen?" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. You should defimitely continue it and update a lor, lol. It's really cool. I especially liked the song. I was listening to it while I read it. I love when stories have songs as part of the story itself, I think it's really cool, especially if you listen to it as you read. I can't wait for the next update, I hope you continue, and with more songs too!!! ;-) -TrinityK
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I say keep it up its a good story and if ur almost done with it i think u should just finshe is cause u kno how it is when u readin a story then all of a sudden the writter just stops writting when they are so close to being done....and that just makes me sad cause u will never kno what will happen next so PLZ finshe tha story cause its good and i would like to know what will happen next so hope u Update soon!!! Later
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2005 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
why havent u updated yet if u dont hurry and update ill go on a hunger strike until u do plz hurry
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 23:04 CST
Comment/Review:
whats taking so long with the updates i want to read more plz hurry and update
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Reviewed By: Ultimategamer982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o my god i love ur fan fic it rocks.I really like how u added the twist and how kagome beats the $%#& out of ppl that rocks.Update soon i cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Kayla2828 On: July 07, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one to but please keep writing i wont to here what comes next so please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Kaira2828 On: June 27, 2005 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your story please write on pretty please now im ubsessed with your story and its gonna drive me crazy not nowing what happens so please write soom more.
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: tiannabannana(NSI) On: June 25, 2005 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo hmm i'm not sure abotu the twist do what u like but for the twist im not sure, man now im confused so yeah do a twist to make it thrilling :)
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Reviewed By: go_die6790 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought i'd b a dork and review on one of my own stories...hehehe...im sucha dork, from my friends POV, HA whadda they no? welll i want you ppl to review on my other stories to! so chop chop and get reviewin!
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Title: wowzer
Reviewed By: TiannaBannana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW i really love this fic its so great, your lucky only 9 days, i espicially like the part of Manbeast bashing and Kouga bashing. i hate them both they deserve eachother also its cool how kirara is a human in this one, plz update soon it rox
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 22, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting to be a very interesting story. I love what you've done to Manbeast lol! That is such an appropriate name for that ?*!@$. Just some words to the wise watch you spelling on some words. It ain't a major problem it's just a little more difficult to read some sentences. Keep up the good work. Ja ne!
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLovELorn (nsi sry) On: May 22, 2005 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwww..... lmao keep up the good work and update again soon please? sorry to hear your grounded that must suck! well keep up your good work!
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Title: -gawk-
Reviewed By: InbuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: May 21, 2005 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-mouth wide open- *gawk* only 9 days? dammit i've got like 15 this sucks!!!!! where do you live i'm moving there!!!!! ^__^ lmao well anywho keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Title: wow....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow keep up the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: Rain_Angel_22 On: May 18, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty good,i just have one problem.When writing a Fanfic,you shouldnt put your own little notes in.It kinda takes away from the story,cause i was getting into it.And then i see your little message,lol.it's ok.since it was your first one.Good Job.And good story.^_^
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