"We Shine" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: utena_sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 14:38 CDT Comment/Review: this is so MOE! Im a huge utena/anshii fan, and i totally love this!
| Title: Choppy Reviewed By: Unsigned Dee On: June 04, 2005 17:36 CDT Comment/Review: I've always had an inclination for "choppy" poems like these. The abrupt lines combined with the repitition emphasized everything, giving everything drama and importance. For such a short work like this poem, you did a good job of putting readers in a particular scene and getting a story across.
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