| "Un cuento de dos amores(A tale of two loves)" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: The-reviewer On: June 24, 2005 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY VERY SWEET. I love the romance, keep it coming!!! ^_^ :)
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Reviewed By: ThE_iNU On: June 24, 2005 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY VERY SWEET. I love the romance, keep it coming!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. It keeps getting better and better. PLease update soon.
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Make go to the Dance!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 14, 2005 00:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. You're moving them along at a good pace. I hope to read more soon. :)
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Title: awwww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... how sweet keep up the good work and update again soon pleasE?
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Reviewed By: Samishii Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2005 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story! Its very well written and romantic. I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: June 08, 2005 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it ^_^ Poor Inu ;*; you're not worthless as a human!! will the boy ever get over that?!! Actually, would he be Inuyasha if he did?? :) update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inuluvher151 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2005 11:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey i really like tis story keep up the good work can't wait until you update again ~Inuluvher151~
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 08, 2005 08:28 CDT
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Your story is really good. I'm still enjoying reading every chapter. I hope you update soon. Thanks! (By the way, you spelled 'dinner' wrong. 'Diner' is a small cafe and 'dinner' is the evening meal.)
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Reviewed By: Inubutterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story thus far. It's unique and entertaining. I could feel my own heart skip a beat when Inu held Kagome's hand....please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: w_j (not logged in) On: June 03, 2005 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story so far and your writing style is engaging. I think this story deserves more reviews and -- please don't take offense -- I think the Spanish title is putting people off. I skipped the story several times before I finally clicked on it to see if I should tell the mm.org moderators that an author had accidentally put a Spanish language story in the English Inuyasha section. Your story is good and I think more people would read and review it if the title were in English. That's just a suggestion and I'll keep reading and watching for updates. Good luck!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 07:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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alrighty, u promised the shopping AND the date in chapter 3....*pouts* i'm unhappy. anyway, good story, i like it.....its interesting. i look forward to the next chapter.....which i hope some Really soon!
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Reviewed By: tinky On: May 28, 2005 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more?
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just read your first chapter and I like your story so far. I do have one suggestion, and that is to ask someone to read your story for errors. You switch points of view in a couple of places and it is confusing (from first person to third) and you have several missing words in sentences and typos. You write well and I think if you either proof read your story again or have someone else proof read it, you will have perfect spelling and grammar. Good luck!
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