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"Un cuento de dos amores(A tale of two loves)" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ]
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 Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2005 17:19 CDT
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I just read your first chapter and I like your story so far. I do have one suggestion, and that is to ask someone to read your story for errors. You switch points of view in a couple of places and it is confusing (from first person to third) and you have several missing words in sentences and typos. You write well and I think if you either proof read your story again or have someone else proof read it, you will have perfect spelling and grammar. Good luck!
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