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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 21:05 CDT
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Nice chapter. I really liked how you tied up the loose ends, and yet kept everything realistic. What with Nathan going to jail that is. I am definitly looking forward to your comming story, and will eagerly read it. As always great job with your story, and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 21:01 CDT
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Thank you so much for not having 'that' happen to Marie. I really appreciate it. And thanks also for the alert, I appreciate it. Stupid email isn't getting through either, my friends can't even get emails to me so I'm not sure where the problem is. Anyway nice chapter I really liked it. Crud that evil Ruby. Oooh if I had the chance I'd make sure she'd get a taste of my blade. (Unsheathes sword) No one should mess with true love. (Sighs) But thats neither here nor there. Anyway once again nice chapter I really liked it. Though strangly it reminds me of a nightmare I had a few weeks back that this strangly reminds me of. Mainly it was of everyone with Raven's blood turning evil and betraying him and that he couldn't trust anyone for fear of betrayal and being stabbed in the back. Ie quite similar to Nathan's perdicament. Worst thing was of Marie and Nathan betraying him. But anyway nice job keep up the good work and update when you can. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 10:30 CDT
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Oh man this can't be. Please please please don't have Marie betraying Nathan, its just would be so saddening. Though if its what must be, then so be it. I just hope everything works out well in the end. Still I definily enjoyed the chapter, and I'm glad you updated it. I hope theater was enjoyable for you. Oh and sorry bout not reviewing faster. Stupid email alerts aren't ariving for me anymore. But anyway keep up the good work, and update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 22:50 CDT
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hmm this is definitly getting interesting. I just wonder whatis all going on. Seems she did have a continency plan in the works were Nathan to fail in his tasks. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh and don't worry bout delay in updating. I don't mind. I'd have to say that at least you update faster than some people's stories I've read. Tasks a few over a month for each chapter. Anyway keep up the good work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:11 CDT
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Hmm this is getting quite good and interesting. Thanks for showing that Nathan does have powers also. Though I'll admit that I am wondering if everything is as it appears, or if this is just an elaboratly set up trap. Eh I'll just have to wait and see. I'm still loving this, and I hope you continue to write this, and other stories. Please keep up the good work, and update as soon as you can. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 22:19 CDT
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Hmm moral dilema gotta love em. Hopefully Craven is listening to his heart, cause if he kills Nathan then Marie is going to hate him for the rest of her life. Thanks for throwing me in this by the way, I really appreciate it. I can't wait for the next chapter, so please try and update soon. Oh and by the way how come we never see Nathan's powers. If he is Craven's son, then how come he can't use the same abilities as Craven?
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 22:23 CDT
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(Cries) Poor Angel, thats so sad. Man this could turn into father vs. Daughter at this rate. Eh anyway keep up the good work, and update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 22:38 CDT
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Cool a sword, me likey swords. (Grins) Then again my other favorite anime (Rurouni Kenshin) Deals with swords. Anyway nice chapter I really liked it. I hope Angel is okay, it would be so saddening if she didn't make it. (Sniffles) Anyway keep up the good work, and update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2005 22:59 CDT
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Thanks for the compliment Kivalle, I definitly do enjoy this, and I'm glad you appreciate it. I definitly liked how this story went, I think it makes more sense that what you originally planned, all I mean is having them make out instead of them skipping straight to the sex is something I liked. Gives it a more realistic appearance. Anyway I'm still loving this, and I hope you update it soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2005 23:15 CDT
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Hmm things are definitly heating up here. Though I do agree with Nathan, I've seen quite a few guys who really need to learn to be nicer to people. (Rolls eyes) Gives the rest of us lousy reputations. Eh nothing to do though, anyway I liked this. Seemed like a normal typical evening, though one has to wonder what Ruby is planning. Does she want Nathan to get close enough to eliminate Maire, or her father? Or is there something more....sinister in the works. I hope you update this soon cause I'm really enjoying this. Its been a long time since I've read a story like this, plus its one of the few that keeps me guessing as to what 'will' occur. Anyway keep up the good work and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 23:49 CDT
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Nice chapter. I really liked it. Glad to see you updated. Really busy? Eh anyway nice chapter really liked it. Keep up[ the good work. Can't wait to see how the date goes.
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 22:23 CDT
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Nice chapter. Thanks for showing me what Marie can do. I'll be glad to see whats going to happen. So How did you come up with this idea? Nice going with this chapter. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work, and update when your able to. Oh and don't worry about not being to quick updating this. I'd say quality over quantity. Anyway keep it up. ^_^ InuGhost
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2005 22:05 CDT
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Yeah you updated! ^_^ Thats good to see, I've been waiting to see this chapter for quite awhile. It shall be interesting to see just how this all turns out. Though uh just a note....not all us loner guys who treat people nicely are evil. Regardless of what others say. Eh anyway keep up the good work and update soon. Oh and is it possible to see what kind of powers Marie has next chapter maybe?
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Reviewed By: InuGhost [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2005 16:59 CDT
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Geeze talk about sibling rivalry. Sorry bout not reviewing earlier, I had class the day I heard about this, opened the email, and never got a chance to read it so it ended up in the back of my mind. Anyway nice chapter. Seems Ruby killed Scarlet to get the kid. This probably won't end well. Craven may very well have just set in motion that which he was trying to avoid. Eh anyway update when your able to, and keep up the good work. InuGhost
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Reviewed By: Siren_Soul [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 08:25 CDT
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WTH? I thought only Scarlett got pregnant?!? OMG, this is an awesome story. LOL at deranged butterfly. But, we want ROREK! *cries* Please? *sniff* You were right when Raven said something about all the fangirls... Roreks eyes are to die for! Please keep updating Return of Rorek!
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