| "Don't know what you've got 'til it's gone" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bladecutter1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 00:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I'm in love. XD Nice story, finnaly got the stupid thing to work... ^.^
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Title: awsome!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue-not signed in On: July 11, 2005 13:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yet another great chapter from you :-) You are one gifted writter. i think your story is very well written and i give it a standing ovation. i am going to be rambeling for the next few minutes because i want to let you know how wonderful i think your fic is. i think it is very important to let a writter know how talented they are so that they are encouraged to continue writing. so with that said: your fic is amazing, fantastic, entertaining, interesting, and delicious. you leave me speechless. So please, please, please, please, please update again soon. because as you can see i am hooked :-)
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Reviewed By: Black_rose28, not signed on On: July 11, 2005 00:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
Love it!!! Please update soon i cant believe u left me hanging like that lol, also love the way u made Akane feel for Inuyasha cuz of the pain and hurt in his eyes, very moving. I dunno y but im very emotional 2nite, n if i read something sad i cant really keep the tears in T_T Plzzz update soon!
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Title: AWSOME!!
Reviewed By: alize On: July 01, 2005 09:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great!!! you have got to update again soon. dont leave me hangging please. i'm soooo hooked to this story it's one of the best i've read in a long time.
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Reviewed By: Sara R. On: June 28, 2005 23:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait til the next chapter. It's getting so good!!!! Please update soon.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: alize On: June 26, 2005 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just came across this fic and i have to say it is amazing. it is vey well put together. i give it a standing ovation. you are a gifted writter and in hope to see more from you. i also hope you finish this fanfic to completion. i really am enjoying it so hope you update soon and dont leave us fans waiting.
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Title: super!
Reviewed By: aNiMe HeLLcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 20:47 PDT
Comment/Review:
very impressive. i as always look forward to more chapters. thank you for your comments on my story. its slow goings but i'm almost done w/ the next chapter. thank you again!
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 03:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
It was great like all ur other chapters, update soon plz ^__^ keep up the good work
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Title: Don't Know What Got 'Til It's Gone
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2005 21:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2005 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. As usual the chapter was great, and you even ended it off with a lemon. Please update soon! I can't wait til the next chapter! ~starlit333
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Title: love it o so much!
Reviewed By: aNiMe HeLLcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 12:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! i'm a writer mm.org too and let me just say that as a fellow writer i am very picky about what i read. it seems that some people just take on a writing task and they dont know what they're doing! but i really truly love this fic! i love your writing style. please update soon i cant wait to read more! also, please check out my fic, called cats and dogs!
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Reviewed By: Lady_Ceri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 12:14 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll be your beta, if you'd like. If you are interested, just email me at croc_de_la_lune_betawolf@hotmail.com (I'm trying to save you time, lol)... This is an excellent story! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: missbritt321 On: June 06, 2005 20:24 PDT
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its really good i like it sorry i cant be of help for your beta i have trouble woth spelling and grammer so yeh well you should continue ok i cant waot to read what happenes next well thanks for a good story so far;)
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2005 18:36 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOOOOOOOOOOVE YOUR STORY!!!! i hope kagome stays hanyou....i like it better:P keep up the great work and update soon:)
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 11:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
This is a really good start to your fic, very well written with only a few grammar mistakes, which could probably easily be caught by a beta. One line in particular striked me as exceptionally beautiful: "The waning moon was a closing eye in a jewel-scattered blanket." The imagiry in those few words is flawless. I wanted to let you know how much I really enjoyed this first chapter of your fic, and that you have a new reader if the rest of the story proves to be as good as promised by the first installment. ~futekioosha~
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