Title: Review From the FFARG
Reviewed By: KACD2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2005 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please ingore the other "review" it was an accident. Wow, this is a great story so far. makes me want to read the rest. As for the "bad english", you might want to get a beta for that. You can find them here: http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&th=24885&start=0& I have one, and she's wonderful. I really don't think you need help with the story line right now. Your story gives enough to keep the reader wanting more.
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