| "The Dreamstone" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:35 CDT
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I like it, then again i like any and every fic that consists a harem for one person. I love this, fic. and I also like your style of writing...lemon with a plot...^.^
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not much action in this chapter but still nice.
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Reviewed By: nonengel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 01:32 CST
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nice chapter, i'm looking forward to kasumi taking action
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 09:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter, but too short. Oh well, better short than nothing. Will there be a threesome with both girls and female Ranma? Some lesbian action would be great.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chapter. Keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: Kurenai-chan On: May 31, 2006 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating. =] This chapter was great. Keep up the good work and update soon. =D
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Reviewed By: Ransumi On: September 26, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YA MUST UPDATE FASTER!! =D No pressure tho. ;] Keep up the good work. =D
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Title: Comments from HV
Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 09:48 CDT
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I was thinking of deleting and rewritting this fic. Or perhaps adding the match to another fic idea and making the erotica and added bonus like I was thinking about for Switch (A Yugioh fic). I have a couple ideas involving either divine beasts or dragons that might be of use. Thanks for the comments. HV
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Reviewed By: Goddess of Jupiter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 19:21 CDT
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Danm it, I was hoping this would be a Kasumi/Ranma/Shampoo fic. that it.
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2005 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Well Looks quite interesting so far. I look forward to more!
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Title: naughty
Reviewed By: ucchan On: August 02, 2005 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very naughty..
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Reviewed By: Jedi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait to read more, please update as soon as you possibly can. Although you need to try and use spell check more
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Title: Chap 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An excelent start, and such a teaser to boot *smirks* naughty naughty! I look forward to seeing more.
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Reviewed By: Maoloch On: May 26, 2005 12:03 CDT
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I look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: maoloch On: May 24, 2005 21:22 CDT
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looking forward to reading more of the story
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