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| "Pills and Ramen" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: phantomasgria [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2008 19:57 CDT
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this is a really good story. i cant wait untill he stops taking the drugs and everyone sees how depressed he really is
| Reviewed By: phantomasgria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 22:43 CST
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I really like this story. Please UPDATE!!!!
| Reviewed By: Dino-Snide On: September 11, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the concept of the story. I loved the chapters so far, please update soon.
| Reviewed By: (akuma_river) On: June 24, 2005 23:58 CDT
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Wow, Love it. Awesome. Sad and depressing, but in reality I would expect the people to treat him that way. Love how this is all connecting to the cannon storyline in the manga/anime. In the manga we are dealing with Itachi and his gang right now. chapter 265 and still now sasuke since he left. In the anime it is Orochimaru and Kabuto, but I haven't heard mention of Sasuke, I think it is just filler. I don't know why they don't do the Kakashi side story. It's on episode 140. And the 2nd part of the series is still young. Love the story, sad but realistic. Keep up the awesome work, btw why wouldn't ff.net allow the lyrics? Also are you planning on putting this up on adultfanfiction.net (just google it) ? Huge area for Naruto about 800 fics? Love the story, Coolsa.
| Reviewed By: Pluff On: June 23, 2005 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it keep up the good work
| Reviewed By: random reader On: June 22, 2005 00:14 CDT
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wow. Great story so far, even though it is a bit dark, it's a new way to look at the character (and also most likely in reality). Hope you continue this. Update soon please!
| Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 23:59 CDT
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first off, liked the chapter. Now that Naruto is going to be off the meds is he going to develop multiple personalities? In high school i wrote a paper on multiple personality disorder, and I remember that children that have been through tramatizing siduations often develope many personalities that don't obviously show up untill they are older. I think there are three major ones. They innosent child, the older angry adult that dominates, and the every day personality that is most promanent untill the disorder shows itself. Because Naruto has been on all of the pills it may change the effects, mainly I would think the signs of the disorder. If you are looking for a path to take I think that it would be a good choice because you have already introduced other personalities that are inside of him. Most of the time people with MPD are not aware of the other personalities, but because he has already met them I would imagin that this would not be the case with him. Of course I could be telling you things that you already know and have decided on based on this chapter. But just in case, I thought I'd let you know. nehoo. liked that chapter. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
| Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 03:47 CDT
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as much as this story is dark, i kind of like it. gives a new look on things. (this is not a flaim -->) i'm not sure i like the idea of Shizune going through Naruto's file. and i'm pretty sure i don't like of Tsunade telling Kakashi about it. it's a breach of pacient confedenciality. the only person who may have been alowed to go through his file out of those three was Tsunade. having been on the bad end of a breach of paciant confedensciality i can tell you it's not a plesant experiance and and frankly it sucks. Tsunade should have aproched Naruto and told him ahead of time that she had to inform Kakashi, if only because he is/was his team leader and for the protection of other ninja that could be teamed up with him. this does not include the information about his sexual history, however, Kakashi has no need to know this information and Tsunade should never have told him. If were Naruto i'd be a little pissed that she had, and that Shizune read through the file. other than that i like the story. please up date soon and keep up the good work!
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