| "One Night Leads To A New Future" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: LumChan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 18:07 CDT
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I love this story! You are such a great writer.. I know that it is easy to get caught up with other things but if you ever have the time you should continue this story its excellent.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's it? *whimpers* That cant be the end!! They both had sex without protection, shouldnt she get preggo. And, her father thinks she'll be baq in a week, when he finds out shouldnt he be mad enough to go all out on Inuyasha and sesshomaru company? Oh, dont forget that naraku. He could try n rape kags again or try kill Inu! And you said Inu want her to not work n jus live home n be alright. Shouldnt they like get married n get lil inu's n kags for kagome to be a house wife. They didnt even confess their love!! I'm sorry if i soun like a baby, but you cant take that away from ayoung teen such as myself. Plz continue!!! You dont kno how much I luv your writing!!
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Reviewed By: melissagreenwood777 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 23:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOw! I loved it^.^!It was short but very good! I like the fact that Inuyasha was so sweet and I found the story quite original. I'll be sure to read your other stories, if you have any. Bye *Leaves and checks for other stories*
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Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: EmErAlDdRaGoN699 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story and are you going to update soon with more chapters?? will Kagome get pregnet?? i see them getting married. and i can sence that Naraku isnt through with them yet. and i cant wait for a new chap. *~*EmeraldDragon*~*
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Reviewed By: Orb On: June 13, 2005 20:20 CDT
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Aww thats was a cute little series. Yea things were a touch fast, but it was nicely done! Take care!
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Reviewed By: Ax On: June 13, 2005 01:25 CDT
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I love this story! I don't care what anyone else says, CLIFFHANGERS RULE!
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I was hoping to see her father's reaction when he eventually realizes this is final and Kagome's gone for good. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: Nightmares [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 10:35 CDT
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Hey this is a great story....Please keep updating cause i'm really enjoying a lot and i'm also wanting to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 11, 2005 19:52 CDT
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I have to admit that I am a little sad it ended there but at the same time it ended on a positive note and wrapped up nicely. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 17:15 CDT
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Great story.............keep it up and update soon plez..:)
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 11:49 CDT
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awww!! great ending! I really like it!
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: June 11, 2005 05:13 CDT
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This was a really great story! And it had a great length too... not too short... not too long. I don't like super duper long stories that take FOR-EV-ER to read. Now that this story is done maybe you can write a sequel or a little something to show us what happens later...or...uh whatever. Is just me, or did any of that not make any sense? (it sounded good in my head...*pout*) oh well. NEWAYZ great story!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 08, 2005 05:00 CDT
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Excellent chapter. That went well, I can't help but wonder how not only her father will react when she doesnt return but how Naraku will act when he find out. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: FluffyLover7 On: June 08, 2005 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT.
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