| "Ashes to Ashes" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 00:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's interesting, but it needs a bang to it. i mean it's so quiet and it needs something exciting and loud. other then Ino. Iukra wouldn't have charge at Naruto like that. why did you place him on team 8? i like the real naruto better. no offense, but i think the mr. i-am-cool postion has been taken. by neji and sasuke. i really like the loud, cheerfull, annoying Naruto better. it just didn't seem right, Naruto acting cool and mysterious. it's just my opinions...
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Title: ruff rider for life
Reviewed By: rough rider for life [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u hav to updatre plzzz update update and sooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! . BTW ur story is da best o yea and how did naruto get so strong ? I think its kool for once naruto is really strong
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Reviewed By: Skuld's Sentaro5 On: October 03, 2005 10:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooooooo interesting story, hmmmm you gonna explain how naruto got so strong, and i assume this is going to be naruto/ino? any ways keep upteh good work and udpate soon V^_^
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Reviewed By: the who? On: June 14, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It rocks! best fanfic i've read in awhile. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ninja art On: June 13, 2005 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the coolest story ever, no honestly, i'm completely serious, it is. update soon, i want to find out what happens!
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Title: Nice Work
Reviewed By: Shadow117 On: June 01, 2005 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very splendid opening. You're one hell of a writer between this and A Gift ( Which has me hoping you'll update soon there also, heh.). You've left alot of mystery in the beginning, which makes it excellent IMO for the start. One thing that's bugging me though is what his childhood past was like in this AU for him to not want anyone to know he's back. Keep up the excellent writing and hope to see future updates to your workings.
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Reviewed By: dragonmaster86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another GREAT story by you BigAznDaddy! I must say you have a great tallent for writin Naruto Fanfics! I love how you made the romantic focus towards Naruto and Ino this time. I can't wait for the next chapter! On a side note, for all the reviewers who liked this story, I highly suggest you also read BigAznDaddy's other story "A Gift" because it's just as good!
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Reviewed By: joyceeee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow, it looks to be an extremely promising story! Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: OneAznDragon On: May 28, 2005 11:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yo Bro, Not bad for the chapter / Opening. Let me know when there's more!
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